耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid incorrect word usage. For example, say "Yes, I consider myself a patient person because..."

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm and wait without getting frustrated in difficult situations.

建議: Your answer is too long and filled with hesitations. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, correct grammar is important.

範例: I feel impatient when I work hard but do not see results. However, I try to overcome this feeling by reminding myself to stay focused and keep trying.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases and hesitations. Use linking words to show contrast and be more specific in your explanation.

範例: It depends on the task. Sometimes I feel exhausted, but if the topic interests me, I feel motivated to continue working.

建議: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain why patience is important in your job.

範例: Yes, patience is very important in my job as a research assistant because research often takes a long time and requires careful attention to detail.

建議: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to compare your past and present patience clearly.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be very eager and impatient, but now I understand the importance of waiting and working steadily.

× From my judgement, I'm sure the outpatient person.

✓ From my judgement, I'm sure I am a patient person.

The student incorrectly used 'outpatient' instead of 'patient'. 'Outpatient' refers to a medical term, not a personality trait. The correct adjective to describe someone who can tolerate delays or problems is 'patient'.

× that sometimes make me impatient, but uh, uh, I can, I always overcome that, uh, impatience of situations and.

✓ that sometimes makes me impatient, but uh, uh, I can, I always overcome that, uh, impatience of situations.

The subject 'that' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, the sentence was incomplete and was corrected for clarity.

× if the topic is, umm, invested through me.

✓ if the topic is, umm, interesting to me.

The phrase 'invested through me' is incorrect. The student likely meant 'interesting to me'. Using the correct preposition 'to' with 'interesting' is necessary for proper meaning.

× So research is a very work the where patients is very much useful, very much needed.

✓ So research is a very demanding work where patience is very useful and very much needed.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Work the where patients' is incorrect. It should be 'demanding work where patience' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'patients' should be 'patience' (the quality).

× That's why I have to patient in my job.

✓ That's why I have to be patient in my job.

The verb 'have to' should be followed by the base form 'be' before the adjective 'patient'. Omitting 'be' is a grammatical error.

× Yeah, I'm more patient than when I am, when I am. I was a child in my childhood.

✓ Yeah, I'm more patient than I was when I was a child.

The sentence is redundant and incorrectly structured. 'When I am, when I am' is unnecessary repetition. Also, 'in my childhood' is redundant after 'when I was a child'. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× I was too much desperate to do something and I have no, so I have no so much patience in my study or anything.

✓ I was very desperate to do something and I had very little patience in my studies or anything.

'Too much desperate' is incorrect; 'very desperate' is appropriate. Also, 'I have no, so I have no so much patience' is awkward and incorrect. 'I had very little patience' correctly expresses the intended meaning with proper quantifiers and tense.