耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, say "I am a patient person because I don't get upset over small things, which helps me maintain good relationships with friends and colleagues."

範例: I am a patient person because I don't get upset over small things, which helps me maintain good relationships with friends and colleagues.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain with specific reasons or examples. For instance, "I feel impatient when people are late because it wastes my time and disrupts my plans."

範例: I feel impatient when people are late because it wastes my time and disrupts my plans.

建議: Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific about your feelings and reasons. For example, "I feel bored when I have to do the same task repeatedly, so I prefer to have new challenges every day to stay motivated."

範例: I feel bored when I have to do the same task repeatedly, so I prefer to have new challenges every day to stay motivated.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Clearly state your job and explain why patience is needed. For example, "Yes, my job as a yoga instructor requires patience because I work with many different people and need to guide them carefully."

範例: Yes, my job as a yoga instructor requires patience because I work with many different people and need to guide them carefully.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have gained more life experience and learned to handle situations calmly."

範例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have gained more life experience and learned to handle situations calmly.

× I am a very patient person and I do not be a hyper in small things, so it is very good to make a good relations with friends and colleagues.

✓ I am a very patient person and I am not hyper about small things, so it is very good to build good relationships with friends and colleagues.

The phrase 'I do not be a hyper' is incorrect because 'be' should be in the present participle form 'am' to match the subject 'I'. Also, 'hyper' is used as an adjective here, so 'am not hyper' is correct. Additionally, 'make a good relations' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'build good relationships' because 'relations' is plural and 'make' is less appropriate here.

× I am a very patient person and I do not be a hyper in small things, so it is very good to make a good relations with friends and colleagues.

✓ I am a very patient person and I am not hyper about small things, so it is very good to build good relationships with friends and colleagues.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'hyper'; the correct preposition is 'about'. Also, 'with friends and colleagues' is correct, but 'make a good relations' should be 'build good relationships' for natural usage.

× Like sometimes I become angry then I lose my patience and for someone.

✓ Sometimes I become angry and then I lose my patience with someone.

The original sentence has awkward structure and an incomplete phrase 'and for someone'. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and prepositions to clearly express the idea.

× Like sometimes I become angry then I lose my patience and for someone.

✓ Sometimes I become angry and then I lose my patience with someone.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition to express losing patience towards a person is 'with'.

× So I feel boring when work one work I do in and again, so I do not like to do something for a long time.

✓ I feel bored when I do the same work again and again, so I do not like to do something for a long time.

The adjective 'boring' is incorrectly used instead of 'bored' to describe the speaker's feeling. Also, the sentence structure is confusing; placing 'again and again' after 'the same work' clarifies the meaning.

× So I want something new at every day.

✓ So I want something new every day.

The phrase 'at every day' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'every day' without 'at' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, my yoga require to me be patient.

✓ Yes, my yoga requires me to be patient.

The noun 'yoga' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires' to agree in number. Also, the phrase 'require to me be patient' is incorrect; the correct form is 'requires me to be patient'.

× Yes, my yoga require to me be patient.

✓ Yes, my yoga requires me to be patient.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'require'; the correct structure is 'requires me to'.

× So. In my opinion, there are many situations when people have to use someone and many new people with.

✓ In my opinion, there are many situations when people have to be patient with someone and meet many new people.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning by completing the thought and using appropriate verbs and prepositions.

× So. In my opinion, there are many situations when people have to use someone and many new people with.

✓ In my opinion, there are many situations when people have to be patient with someone and meet many new people.

The phrase 'have to use someone' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'be patient with someone'. Also, 'many new people with' is incomplete; adding 'meet' clarifies the meaning.

× That's why I am more patient now as compared to my first stage because now I have learned many more experience of life.

✓ That's why I am more patient now compared to when I was a child because I have gained much more life experience.

The phrase 'my first stage' is unclear; 'when I was a child' is a clearer comparison. Also, 'many more experience' is incorrect; 'much more life experience' is the correct quantifier and noun form.