耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然且内容相关，但“rushing scenes”表达不准确，应改为“rushing things”或“rushing situations”。建议使用更准确的词汇表达，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I am usually a patient person because I believe rushing things rarely leads to good results. For example, when I face difficult problems, I always remind myself to stay calm to avoid making mistakes.

建議: 语法和用词有误，如“led me”应为“makes me”，且“not concentrate”应为“not concentrating”。建议注意时态和动词形式，提升表达准确性。

範例: I feel impatient when someone makes me repeat the same task again and again because it shows they are not concentrating on what I am saying.

建議: 表达较清晰，但“dive the task into small sections”不自然，应为“divide the task”。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意词序和搭配。

範例: I feel challenged when I have to do something for a long time because it requires good time management. To handle this, I usually divide the task into small sections, which helps me concentrate better and stay motivated throughout the process.

建議: 回答中有较多语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。语法错误如“we usually coding”应为“we usually code”。建议减少语气词，注意语法和句子结构。

範例: Yes, of course. As a computer science student, we usually code, and sometimes the program crashes. You have to be patient to find out which line causes the problem.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇“when when”，且“can not can really leads”表达混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，提升表达清晰度。

範例: Yes, probably because as I have grown up and gained more experience, I have realized that rushing does not lead to good results. So now, when I face difficult programs, I am patient and complete the tasks step by step.

× I think it's those occasions like someone led me to repeat one task again and again that makes me feel that they are not concentrate on what I'm saying.

✓ I think it's those occasions like someone leading me to repeat one task again and again that make me feel that they are not concentrating on what I'm saying.

这里“led”应改为现在分词“leading”，表示正在发生的动作；“makes”应改为“make”，因为主语是复数“occasions”；“concentrate”应改为现在分词“concentrating”，表示动作的进行。

× I think it's those occasions like someone led me to repeat one task again and again that makes me feel that they are not concentrate on what I'm saying.

✓ I think it's those occasions like someone leading me to repeat one task again and again that make me feel that they are not concentrating on what I'm saying.

主语“occasions”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，而非单数“makes”。

× To handle this, I usually dive the task into small sections which help me more concentrate and stay motivated throughout the process.

✓ To handle this, I usually divide the task into small sections which help me concentrate more and stay motivated throughout the process.

“dive”应为“divide”，表示“划分”；“more concentrate”应调整为“concentrate more”，副词修饰动词应放在动词后。

× So I will feel impatient on those occasions.

✓ So I will feel impatient in those occasions.

习惯用法中，表示“在某些场合”应使用介词“in”而非“on”。

× Uh, as I'm studying computer science and we usually coding, sometimes the uh program will break down and you will be patient.

✓ Uh, as I'm studying computer science and we usually code, sometimes the uh program will break down and you have to be patient.

“coding”应改为动词原形“code”，因为前面有助动词“usually”；“you will be patient”改为“you have to be patient”更符合语境，表示必须耐心。

× Yes, probably because when when I grow up and experience more I find that rushing can not can really leads to good results.

✓ Yes, probably because when I grew up and experienced more, I found that rushing cannot really lead to good results.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，“grow”改为“grew”，“experience”改为“experienced”，“find”改为“found”；“can not can really leads”语序错误，应为“cannot really lead”。

× Yes, probably because when when I grow up and experience more I find that rushing can not can really leads to good results.

✓ Yes, probably because when I grew up and experienced more, I found that rushing cannot really lead to good results.

动词“leads”应为原形“lead”，因为前面有情态动词“cannot”，情态动词后动词用原形。