耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且内容不够具体。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，避免语法错误，并提供具体例子来支持观点。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when interacting with children. For instance, I take time to explain things calmly, which helps resolve any misunderstandings effectively.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议用更清楚的句子表达原因，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: I feel impatient when I lack the skills to solve a problem because it makes me feel frustrated and out of control.

建議: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，语法错误严重，未能直接回答问题。建议简洁明了地表达感受，并提供具体细节。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I try to stay energetic and focused, although it can be tiring sometimes.

建議: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，具体说明工作中需要耐心的情境。

範例: Yes, as a designer, my job requires a lot of patience. For example, I often have to revise posters several times based on feedback before the final version is approved.

建議: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明耐心变化的原因。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I wanted to learn everything quickly, but with age and experience, I have learned to be more patient.

× If you angry with some person, the difficult can be solved.

✓ If you are angry with some person, the difficulty can be solved.

这里缺少动词be动词，且'difficult'应为名词形式'difficulty'，表示困难。

× I think if I don't have enough ability to work the problem, that makes me feel impatient, that makes me feel.

✓ I think if I don't have enough ability to work on the problem, that makes me feel impatient.

动词短语应为'work on the problem'，表示处理问题。句子中重复表达' that makes me feel'，应去掉多余部分。

× The item lose my control.

✓ I lose my control.

句子结构错误，'The item lose my control'不通顺，应改为'I lose my control'，表示我失去控制。

× I'll definitely say I'm wrong feel as I must to be energetic to these things.

✓ I'll definitely say I feel wrong as I must be energetic about these things.

句子结构混乱，'I'm wrong feel'应为'I feel wrong'，'must to be'应为'must be'，'to these things'应为'about these things'。

× You know you have to do something for a lot of.

✓ You know you have to do something for a long time.

短语'for a lot of'不完整，正确表达应为'for a long time'，表示持续一段时间。

× I promise to organize a shuttle to.

✓ I promise to organize a shuttle.

句子末尾多余的' to'，应去掉使句子完整。

× Is an actually Emma designer?

✓ I am actually a UX designer.

句子结构错误，且'Is an actually Emma designer?'不符合语法，应改为'I am actually a UX designer.'，表示职业身份。

× My job really needs requires a lot of patience.

✓ My job really requires a lot of patience.

'needs requires'重复，应只用一个动词'requires'。

× posters often need to be trained by any test before the final mission is appalled.

✓ posters often need to be tested before the final version is approved.

'trained by any test'用词错误，应为'tested'，'mission is appalled'应为'version is approved'，表示最终版本被批准。

× So I have to stay calm and appreciate the feedback from the from my leader.

✓ So I have to stay calm and appreciate the feedback from my leader.

重复使用'from the from'，应去掉多余的'from the'。

× Yes, I believe we are more impatient now compared to mine, compared to when I'm a child.

✓ Yes, I believe we are more patient now compared to when I was a child.

'impatient'与上下文不符，应为'patient'，且'mine'用法错误，应去掉。

× And as a kid I often want to immediately learn and find it.

✓ And as a kid I often wanted to immediately learn and find it.

描述过去的习惯动作，应使用过去时'wanted'。

× Difficult to read but with age and experience I have learned.

✓ It was difficult to read, but with age and experience I have learned.

句子缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整使句子通顺。