耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语句不够流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意冠词使用。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. I have been practicing calligraphy for about seven years since I was a child, and this art requires a lot of patience.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并注意代词和时态的正确使用。

範例: I feel impatient when I have to repeat myself because someone doesn't understand me. Also, waiting for someone for a long time feels like a waste of my time.

建議: 回答表达不清晰且重复较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: I think doing something for a long time is good because it requires patience and effort, which usually leads to positive results.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并使句子更简洁。

範例: Although I am a student now, I believe any job in the future will require patience, especially if I want to advance to a higher position.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，表达更自然。

範例: Yes, definitely. I believe patience needs to be cultivated over time, so I am more patient now than when I was a child.

× I think the calligraphy is a art that really need patience.

✓ I think calligraphy is an art that really needs patience.

这里“calligraphy”是不可数名词，不需要冠词“the”；“a art”应为“an art”，因为“art”以元音音素开头；动词“need”应与单数主语“art”保持一致，改为“needs”。

× When someone who can't understand what I'm saying and let me just repeat again and again, I will feel impatient.

✓ When someone can't understand what I'm saying and makes me repeat again and again, I feel impatient.

“someone who can't understand”中“who”多余且影响句子结构；“let me just repeat”应改为“makes me repeat”，因为是别人使我重复；“I will feel”时态不合适，改为一般现在时“I feel”。

× And another circumstance is the when I wait for someone and I think it's waste of my time to wait her for a long time.

✓ Another circumstance is when I wait for someone and I think it's a waste of my time to wait for her for a long time.

“the when”中“the”多余；“waste”前应加冠词“a”；“wait her”应为“wait for her”，动词“wait”后需加介词“for”。

× I think it's good because if something needed for a long time, it's it's always a a good things and it's really need the patience and the the effort to to make it so I think it's good.

✓ I think it's good because if something needs a long time, it's always a good thing and it really needs patience and effort to make it, so I think it's good.

“something needed”应为“something needs”，保持现在时；“a good things”应为“a good thing”，单复数不一致；“it's really need”应为“it really needs”，主谓一致；“the the effort”重复，应去掉多余的“the”。

× Honestly, I'm a student now, but in the future if I get a job, I think it required me to be patient.

✓ Honestly, I'm a student now, but in the future if I get a job, I think it will require me to be patient.

“it required”时态错误，应为将来时“it will require”，因为谈论未来情况。

× I mean, I think every job you need to be patient.

✓ I mean, I think every job requires you to be patient.

“every job”是单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“requires”，而不是“need”。

× And I think the patients need to cultivate.

✓ And I think patience needs to be cultivated.

“patients”是“病人”的复数形式，错误使用，应为“patience”（耐心）；“need to cultivate”应改为被动语态“needs to be cultivated”，更符合表达习惯。

× So it's it's need a long progress.

✓ So it needs a long process.

“it's need”应为“it needs”，主谓一致；“progress”不可数，表达“过程”应使用“process”。

× And I'm a patient now more than I was a child.

✓ And I'm more patient now than I was a child.

“a patient”应为形容词“patient”，不加冠词；比较结构中“more patient”位置应在“now”之前。