耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, try to vary your vocabulary a bit more.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I rarely get angry when others annoy me. Instead, I stay calm, observe the situation, and forgive them for their behavior.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use linking words to clarify your points. Also, be careful with verb tenses and plural forms.

範例: I feel impatient when someone repeatedly annoys or interrupts me. It's acceptable if it happens once or twice, but if it occurs more than five times, it becomes frustrating.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words and repeated phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clearer explanation.

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually get bored and tired, even though I am patient. For example, if a task takes four or five hours, it can be quite exhausting.

建議: Your answer contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice. Also, try to organize your answer more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, working as a pharmacist requires a lot of patience because many patients come after seeing the doctor with prescriptions. I need to fill their orders, and some expect to receive their medicines immediately.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases like "burst everything" and try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because I have matured. I tend to think carefully and analyze situations before reacting, whereas as a kid, I would often lose my temper when I was upset.

× Working as a pharmacist requires a lot of patient because our patients usually comes together after they have a check with the doctor and all of them are having the prescriptions that I need to fill and some can't wait to get your their medicines at once.

✓ Working as a pharmacist requires a lot of patience because our patients usually come together after they have a check with the doctor and all of them have prescriptions that I need to fill and some can't wait to get their medicines at once.

The word 'patient' is incorrectly used as a noun here; the correct noun form is 'patience' to express the quality of being patient. Also, 'patients' is plural and correctly used, but the verb 'comes' should be 'come' to agree with the plural subject. Additionally, 'are having the prescriptions' should be 'have prescriptions' for correct verb tense and article usage. 'Your their medicines' is incorrect; 'their medicines' is correct.

× Working as a pharmacist requires a lot of patient because our patients usually comes together after they have a check with the doctor and all of them are having the prescriptions that I need to fill and some can't wait to get your their medicines at once.

✓ Working as a pharmacist requires a lot of patience because our patients usually come together after they have a check with the doctor and all of them have prescriptions that I need to fill and some can't wait to get their medicines at once.

The verb 'comes' does not agree with the plural subject 'patients'; it should be 'come' to match the third person plural form.

× The thing that made me impatient is when a person repeatedly annoys me or interrupts me, it's it's fine if it's only one time, two time or two times, but if it's more than five times and it's repeated, repeated that.

✓ The thing that makes me impatient is when a person repeatedly annoys me or interrupts me; it's fine if it's only one time, two times, but if it's more than five times and it's repeated, repeated like that.

The phrase 'one time, two time' should be 'one time, two times' to correctly use plural form for counts greater than one. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to maintain present tense consistent with the question.

× The thing that made me impatient is when a person repeatedly annoys me or interrupts me, it's it's fine if it's only one time, two time or two times, but if it's more than five times and it's repeated, repeated that.

✓ The thing that makes me impatient is when a person repeatedly annoys me or interrupts me; it's fine if it's only one time, two times, but if it's more than five times and it's repeated, repeated like that.

The verb 'made' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'makes' to match the ongoing or habitual situation.

× I would say I am more patient now rather than when I was a child because right now I'm quite mature.

✓ I would say I am more patient now than when I was a child because right now I'm quite mature.

The phrase 'more patient now rather than when' is incorrect; 'more patient now than when' is the correct comparative structure.

× I would say I am more patient now rather than when I was a child because right now I'm quite mature.

✓ I would say I am more patient now than when I was a child because right now I'm quite mature.

The conjunction 'rather than' is incorrectly used for comparison here; 'than' is the correct conjunction to compare two states or times.