耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，且部分句子冗长且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when I face difficult tasks at work or school, I usually take time to research more information online or in textbooks before I start. This helps me avoid mistakes and be more confident in my work.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且内容重复。建议使用正确的时态和表达，明确描述情境，并避免重复。

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time in bad weather. For instance, once my friends and I waited almost two hours to get into a popular restaurant on a hot summer day, which made me very frustrated.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用时态和代词，并提供具体细节。

範例: When I have to work on something for a long time, I usually encourage myself to keep going. For example, if I have an assignment that takes two weeks or a project lasting several months, I stay focused until I finish it successfully.

建議: 回答中表达不够流畅，信息组织混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达耐心的重要性，并用连贯的语言描述具体情况。

範例: Yes, my studies require a lot of patience. As a university student, I often work on assignments and spend about two weeks writing my dissertation, which needs careful attention and persistence.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的句型，清晰对比过去和现在的耐心，并提供具体例子。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I found it hard to focus on schoolwork, but now I can spend weeks working on my dissertation and exploring new resources patiently.

× I had a experience with my friends to wait for a famous restaurant.

✓ I had an experience with my friends waiting for a famous restaurant.

这里experience前面应该用不定冠词an，因为experience以元音音素开头。并且表达等待餐厅时，应该用动名词形式waiting来表达动作。

× We wait for nearly two hours in a hot summer, so that makes me really angry and I would definitely go the restaurant twice.

✓ We waited for nearly two hours on a hot summer day, so that made me really angry and I would definitely go to the restaurant twice.

wait应使用过去时态waited，summer前应加限定词a hot summer day，go后应加介词to，表示去某地。

× We wait for nearly two hours in a hot summer, so that makes me really angry and I would definitely go the restaurant twice.

✓ We waited for nearly two hours on a hot summer day, so that made me really angry and I would definitely go to the restaurant twice.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态。

× I would definitely go the restaurant twice.

✓ I would definitely go to the restaurant twice.

go后面需要加介词to，表示去某个地方。

× Well, I at the beginning I would generally cheer myself up and praise me for something to continue working in something.

✓ Well, at the beginning, I would generally cheer myself up and praise myself to continue working on something.

praise后面应使用反身代词myself，表示自我表扬。

× I would generally cheer myself up and praise me for something to continue working in something.

✓ I would generally cheer myself up and praise myself to continue working on something.

continue working后面应接介词on，表示继续做某事。

× if I have to write assignment for almost half a month or have some works to do almost half a year, I would definitely continue to work until I successful.

✓ if I have to write assignments for almost half a month or have some work to do for almost half a year, I would definitely continue to work until I am successful.

assignments应为复数形式，work不可数不加s，successful前应加be动词am，表示状态。

× if I have to write assignment for almost half a month or have some works to do almost half a year, I would definitely continue to work until I successful.

✓ if I have to write assignments for almost half a month or have some work to do for almost half a year, I would definitely continue to work until I am successful.

assignment应为复数assignments，work作为不可数名词不加s。

× the RMIT university cooperate with my program, usually have a lasting for half a month continue to write my dissertation.

✓ RMIT University cooperates with my program, which usually lasts for half a month to continue writing my dissertation.

cooperate应为第三人称单数cooperates，lasting用法错误，应改为lasts，且表达持续时间用lasts for。

× the RMIT university cooperate with my program, usually have a lasting for half a month continue to write my dissertation.

✓ RMIT University cooperates with my program, which usually lasts for half a month to continue writing my dissertation.

主语是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式。

× the RMIT university cooperate with my program, usually have a lasting for half a month continue to write my dissertation.

✓ RMIT University cooperates with my program, which usually lasts for half a month to continue writing my dissertation.

专有名词前一般不加定冠词the。

× So it requires me to be patient to write down some content.

✓ So it requires me to be patient in writing some content.

表达“在……方面有耐心”应使用介词in。

× Yeah, I believe myself now is a more patient person.

✓ Yeah, I believe I am now a more patient person.

believe后面应接主语和谓语，不能直接用反身代词myself。

× That's because at my young age, I generally need to be patient to everything in my especially in my school work.

✓ That's because when I was young, I generally needed to be patient with everything, especially my school work.

表达“对……有耐心”应使用介词with，young age表达不自然，改为when I was young。

× But now I can sit down in about half a month to enhance my dissertation and keep trying new resources.

✓ But now I can sit down for about half a month to work on my dissertation and keep trying new resources.

表达持续时间应使用for，enhance不适合用于论文写作，改为work on。