耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then briefly explain with specific details. Avoid unnecessary information and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, last year I waited several months for my pre-wedding photos because the company was delayed, but I remained calm and did not complain.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words and adding a bit more detail to explain why queuing makes you impatient.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to stand in long queues, especially at restaurants or service centres, because I dislike waiting and prefer to receive service promptly.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and link your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about why you don't mind long tasks.

範例: I don't mind working on tasks for a long time because I am patient and focused. For instance, I enjoy doing repetitive work at my desk as it helps me concentrate and complete my duties efficiently.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly, avoid fillers, and use correct grammar. Also, explain briefly why patience is or isn't needed in your job.

範例: My job does not require much patience because I work independently and can manage my tasks without waiting for others' responses.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitations and some unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and confidently, and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I am probably less patient now than when I was a child because I have less free time and value it more, so I dislike wasting it.

× Yes, I think I am quite patient because I took the pre wedding photos last year in October.

✓ Yes, I think I am quite patient because I took the pre-wedding photos last October.

The phrase 'last year in October' is redundant; 'last October' is sufficient and more natural. Also, 'pre wedding' should be hyphenated as 'pre-wedding' because it is a compound adjective.

× The company promised to give me the photos earlier this year but they didn't and I just wait and didn't ask until last month.

✓ The company promised to give me the photos earlier this year but they didn't, and I just waited and didn't ask until last month.

The verb 'wait' should be in the past tense 'waited' to maintain consistency with the past tense narrative. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× Lining up makes me feel impatient because I don't like queuing for a restaurant or for a service for a long time.

✓ Lining up makes me feel impatient because I don't like queuing at a restaurant or for a service for a long time.

The correct preposition with 'queuing' when referring to a place is 'at' rather than 'for'. 'Queuing at a restaurant' is the standard expression.

× Even repetitive task is are OK for me.

✓ Even repetitive tasks are OK for me.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. The original sentence incorrectly uses both singular and plural forms together.

× Uh, I don't think my job has such a requirement on patients.

✓ Uh, I don't think my job has such a requirement for patience.

The word 'patients' (people receiving medical care) is incorrect here; the intended word is 'patience' (the ability to wait calmly). Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'for' in this context.

× Umm my job is quite independent so I just need to finish my task and no need to wait for others response, I can take control of my time.

✓ Umm, my job is quite independent so I just need to finish my tasks and don't need to wait for others' responses; I can take control of my time.

A comma is needed after 'Umm' as an interjection. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. 'No need to wait' should be 'don't need to wait' for grammatical correctness. 'Others response' should be possessive 'others' responses'. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma to separate independent clauses.

× No, I think uh, just similar or maybe worse because in the past as a child, uh, I have, I had a lot of free time, but nowadays I treasure time very much and don't want to waste any of it.

✓ No, I think uh, just similar or maybe worse because in the past as a child, uh, I had a lot of free time, but nowadays I treasure time very much and don't want to waste any of it.

The phrase 'I have, I had' is incorrect; only the past tense 'I had' is needed to refer to the past. The present perfect 'I have' is unnecessary and disrupts the tense consistency.