耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains several language errors and unclear phrases such as 'sing sing throughout carefully' and 'reacting and positively'. To improve, focus on clear and correct expressions, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when I face challenging problems at work, I try to stay calm and think carefully rather than reacting impulsively. This approach helps me manage stress more effectively and make better decisions.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has unclear phrases like 'daylight meeting' and 'Less impatient usually stem from a disaster'. To improve, use precise vocabulary and provide clear, specific examples. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for something important, such as a meeting or when the Internet connection is slow. For instance, if I am working online and the connection is unstable, it disrupts my focus and makes me anxious.

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are minor grammar errors such as 'a bit boring' instead of 'a bit bored' and 'take short break' instead of 'take short breaks'. To improve, correct these errors and use linking words to enhance coherence.

範例: I usually feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time. For example, if I have to study for several hours continuously, my concentration tends to drop and I start to lose motivation. However, I try to take short breaks to refresh my mind and stay focused.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains multiple grammar and vocabulary errors such as 'refreshed a great deal of patience', 'bring my client and supportive', and 'Patient is essential'. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions, and provide specific examples with linking words.

範例: Yes, my job definitely requires a great deal of patience. For example, when I am helping students who struggle to understand certain concepts, I need to be calm and supportive to help them improve. Patience is essential to create a positive learning environment and ensure effective communication.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains many unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'I want a child', 'some students go out my way but waste time and experience', and 'stay calm and sing since twice'. To improve, focus on clear, grammatically correct sentences and provide specific examples with linking words.

範例: Definitely. I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. Growing up, I used to get frustrated easily when things did not go my way or when I wasted time. However, I have learned to stay calm and be patient. For example, at work I often have to wait for results or deal with difficult problems.

× I try to stay calm and sing sing throughout carefully rather than reacting and positively.

✓ I try to stay calm and think things through carefully rather than reacting impulsively and positively.

The phrase 'sing sing throughout' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'think things through', which is the correct verb + -ing form to express careful consideration. Also, 'reacting and positively' is incorrect; it should be 'reacting impulsively' or 'reacting positively' depending on meaning. Here, 'impulsively' fits better to contrast with staying calm.

× This approach help me handle stress more effectively and make better decision.

✓ This approach helps me handle stress more effectively and make better decisions.

The subject 'approach' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match the context of making multiple better decisions.

× ...the connection is unstable, it disrupts my focus and make me anxious.

✓ ...the connection is unstable, it disrupts my focus and makes me anxious.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make' to agree in number.

× Less impatient usually stem from a disaster.

✓ Less impatience usually stems from a disaster.

'Less impatient' is incorrect; the noun form 'impatience' is needed here. Also, 'stem' should be 'stems' to agree with the singular subject 'impatience'.

× my concentration tend to drop and I start to lose motivation.

✓ my concentration tends to drop and I start to lose motivation.

The singular subject 'concentration' requires the singular verb 'tends' instead of 'tend'.

× However, I try to take short break to refresh my mind and stay focused.

✓ However, I try to take short breaks to refresh my mind and stay focused.

The phrase 'take short break' is incorrect; it should be plural 'short breaks' to indicate multiple breaks or the general practice of taking breaks.

× Yes, my job definitely refreshed a great deal of patience.

✓ Yes, my job definitely requires a great deal of patience.

The verb 'refreshed' is incorrect in this context; the present tense 'requires' fits better to describe an ongoing job requirement. Also, 'a great deal of patience' is correct.

× when I'm dealing with student who's struggling to grab certain concept, I need to bring my client and supportive to help them improve.

✓ when I'm dealing with students who are struggling to grasp certain concepts, I need to be patient and supportive to help them improve.

'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'who are'. 'grab' is incorrect; 'grasp' is the correct verb for understanding concepts. 'bring my client and supportive' is incorrect; it should be 'be patient and supportive'.

× Patient is essential to create a positive learning environment and ensure effective communications.

✓ Patience is essential to create a positive learning environment and ensure effective communication.

'Patient' is an adjective; the noun 'Patience' is needed here. Also, 'communications' should be singular 'communication' in this context.

× Definitely. I believe I am more patient now than I want a child.

✓ Definitely. I believe I am more patient now than I was as a child.

'want a child' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'was as a child' to compare past and present patience.

× Growing up, I used to get frustrated easily when some students go out my way but waste time and experience.

✓ Growing up, I used to get frustrated easily when some students went out of my way but wasted time and experience.

'go out my way' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'went out of my way'. Also, past tense 'went' and 'wasted' are needed to match 'used to'.

× I have learned to stay calm and sing since twice.

✓ I have learned to stay calm and think twice.

'sing since twice' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'think twice', meaning to consider carefully before acting.

× For example, at work I often have to wait for a result or deal with difficult solution.

✓ For example, at work I often have to wait for a result or deal with difficult solutions.

'difficult solution' should be plural 'difficult solutions' to indicate multiple possible problems.