耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, during my previous examinations, which were quite challenging, I remained calm and focused. As a result, I achieved good grades.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to make your response coherent. Also, be specific about what makes you impatient and explain why.

範例: I often feel impatient when I have to wait for public transportation, especially when buses are late or overcrowded. However, my parents always remind me to stay patient in such situations.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences. Use specific examples and linking words to explain your feelings and experiences.

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel tired but also patient. For instance, I used to save money in my piggy bank, but once I lent it to a friend to buy a laptop, so I had to wait a long time to get it back.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to explain how patience helps you in your job.

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience, especially when I face difficult math problems. If I get frustrated quickly, I can't solve them. So, I take a deep breath and calmly work through the problems, which helps me succeed.

建議: Your answer is relevant but difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary issues. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

範例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, recently I had to wait a long time for a phone case to become available online, and I was able to wait calmly.

× whenever my whenever any situations was coming our life

✓ whenever any situations were coming into our life

The verb 'was' is incorrect for the plural noun 'situations'. The correct past tense plural form is 'were'. Also, 'coming our life' should be 'coming into our life' to use the correct preposition.

× whether it was quite difficult or it seems easy to do

✓ whether it was quite difficult or seemed easy to do

The sentence mixes past and present tense. Since 'was' is past tense, 'seems' should be changed to past tense 'seemed' for consistency.

× Intern, I got a good result that we can take an example of my previous examinations.

✓ In turn, I got a good result; we can take my previous examinations as an example.

'Intern' is a misspelling of 'In turn'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× It was a bit challenging for me, but I had faced all these things very calmly and I get a good result.

✓ It was a bit challenging for me, but I faced all these things very calmly and got a good result.

The past perfect 'had faced' is unnecessary here; simple past 'faced' is appropriate. Also, 'I get' should be past tense 'I got' to match the past context.

× a lot of things that make me a patient specially when I have to be awake for a long time.

✓ a lot of things that make me patient, especially when I have to be awake for a long time.

'a patient' is incorrect; 'patient' is an adjective here, so the article 'a' should be removed. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially'.

× So of anybody's whether it's my family members or not.

✓ So, whether it's my family members or not,

The phrase 'So of anybody's' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'So, whether it's my family members or not,' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Let me let me take an example of a public transportation.

✓ Let me take an example of public transportation.

The phrase 'Let me let me' is repetitive and incorrect. Removing the repetition corrects the sentence.

× Sometime I have to visit through it but it quite a late or they or they are full of crowded that may really feel me or frustrating

✓ Sometimes I have to use it, but it is often late or very crowded, which can really make me feel frustrated.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'Visit through it' is incorrect; 'use it' is better. 'It quite a late' should be 'it is often late'. 'They are full of crowded' is incorrect; 'very crowded' is correct. 'Feel me or frustrating' should be 'make me feel frustrated'.

× but my parents always remind me to be a patient in every situation.

✓ but my parents always remind me to be patient in every situation.

'a patient' is incorrect; 'patient' is an adjective and does not need an article here.

× Well, I really feel of restorative, especially we have to be weighed anything for a long time.

✓ Well, I really feel refreshed, especially when we have to wait for anything for a long time.

'Feel of restorative' is incorrect; 'feel refreshed' is appropriate. 'Weighed' should be 'wait' to match the intended meaning.

× Well, in previous years I'm very well.

✓ Well, in previous years I was very well.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm' with past time reference 'previous years'. It should be past tense 'I was'.

× I'm very fond of collecting the monies in my Piggy Bank.

✓ I'm very fond of collecting money in my piggy bank.

'Monies' is a formal plural rarely used in this context; 'money' is uncountable and appropriate. 'Piggy Bank' should not be capitalized.

× But in previous year my friends needed it to borrow the new laptops and I have given to head for so purpose.

✓ But in the previous year, my friends needed to borrow new laptops, and I gave it to them for that purpose.

'Previous year' needs 'the'. 'Needed it to borrow' is incorrect; 'needed to borrow' is correct. 'I have given to head for so purpose' is incorrect; 'I gave it to them for that purpose' is correct past tense and pronoun use.

× I have to wait for a long time of money get back.

✓ I had to wait a long time to get the money back.

'Have to' should be past tense 'had to' to match past context. 'Of money get back' is incorrect; 'to get the money back' is correct.

× my job requirement from me a lot of patients especially in such a situation, which quite frustrating to me

✓ my job requires a lot of patience from me, especially in situations that are quite frustrating to me

'Requirement' should be 'requires' for subject-verb agreement. 'Patients' is incorrect; 'patience' (uncountable noun) is correct. 'Such a situation' should be plural 'situations' to match context.

× Sometime I face a difficulties to solve my questions, which is related to a mathematics.

✓ Sometimes I face difficulties solving my questions related to mathematics.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'A difficulties' is incorrect; 'difficulties' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Which is' should be 'related to' without 'a' before 'mathematics'.

× If I become a hyper quickly, it never be us.

✓ If I become hyper quickly, it never works out.

'A hyper' is incorrect; 'hyper' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Never be us' is incorrect; 'never works out' is the correct phrase.

× Also, I feel I take a long breath and I try to solve it definitely I get a good result.

✓ Also, I take a deep breath and try to solve it; definitely, I get a good result.

'I feel I take a long breath' is awkward; 'I take a deep breath' is correct. Adding punctuation improves clarity.

× Definitely nowadays a lot of changes I have seen in myself because whenever I was a child I used to get a things quickly

✓ Definitely, nowadays I have seen a lot of changes in myself because when I was a child, I used to get things quickly.

Sentence structure improved by adding commas and correcting 'a things' to 'things'.

× but nowadays I can do a weight that we can take an example of my phone case that it was not available on online and and force the purpose I have to be wait for long time that is available anytime on it.

✓ but nowadays I can wait. For example, my phone case was not available online, and for that reason, I had to wait a long time until it became available.

'Do a weight' is incorrect; 'wait' is correct. 'On online' should be 'online'. 'And and force the purpose' is incorrect; 'and for that reason' is correct. 'I have to be wait' should be 'I had to wait'. Sentence restructured for clarity.