耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语句不完整的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

範例: I think my patience depends on the situation. For example, I am quite patient when playing with my friends, but I can be less patient when talking with my parents at home.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Several things make me feel impatient. For instance, hot weather annoys me, and I also feel impatient when I have nothing to do or cannot complete my to-do list.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议清晰表达感受，使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点。

範例: I feel bored when I have to do something for a long time because I enjoy trying new things. For example, I find singing interesting, so repetitive tasks make me feel restless.

建議: 表达不够准确，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简洁表达观点，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

範例: I don't have a job currently, but studying requires a lot of patience. For example, practicing speaking and reading passages takes time and persistence.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达比较，说明原因，并避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. I had less patience before because I had to study for long hours and had little time to play with my friends.

× If I go out and play with my friend, I I am a very patient person.

✓ If I go out and play with my friends, I am a very patient person.

这里的friend应该用复数形式friends，因为通常和多个朋友一起玩。

× But if I at home and talk with my parents I don't have I don't have more patient and I'm hungry always to talk.

✓ But if I am at home and talk with my parents, I am not very patient and I always want to talk.

缺少动词am，且表达不清晰，'hungry always to talk'应改为'I always want to talk'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I don't have I don't have more patient and I'm hungry always to talk.

✓ I am not very patient and I always want to talk.

'more patient'用法不当，应使用否定形式'not very patient'，且'hungry always to talk'表达不正确。

× Well a lot of things like the weather is too hot to make me impatient and if I don't have anything to do or I can to achieve my To Do List and I will be impacted.

✓ Well, a lot of things like the weather being too hot make me impatient, and if I don't have anything to do or I can't achieve my To Do List, I will be impacted.

'like the weather is too hot to make me impatient'结构不正确，应改为'like the weather being too hot make me impatient'。'can to achieve'错误，应为'can't achieve'。

× Well, I think it's boring because I very like to try new things and I think it's very interesting to try to sing but do something long time make me feel. Yeah, yeah.

✓ Well, I think it's boring because I really like to try new things and I think it's very interesting to try singing, but doing something for a long time makes me feel bored.

'I very like'应为'I really like'，'try to sing'改为'try singing'更自然，'do something long time'应为'doing something for a long time'，且缺少主谓一致。

× Actually, I don't have job, but I need to study and I think study need to be patient and I need to income a lot of patients on the study just like to practice a spoken or to have to reading a passage, yeah.

✓ Actually, I don't have a job, but I need to study and I think studying needs patience. I need to have a lot of patience in my studies, like practicing speaking or reading passages.

缺少冠词'a'，'study need'应为'studying needs'，'income a lot of patients'错误，应为'have a lot of patience'。

× Yes, absolutely. When I was a child, I am more no patient than now because I think it is very because I need to study a long time and I don't have the time to play with my friend and play the.

✓ Yes, absolutely. When I was a child, I was less patient than now because I had to study for a long time and didn't have time to play with my friends.

时态错误，'I am'应为'was'，'more no patient'表达错误，应为'less patient'，'play the'不完整，应删除。