耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always try to understand others' feelings. For example, when someone teaches me, I hope they are patient and gentle, so I try to be the same when teaching others.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的句型，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I feel impatient when someone doesn't understand me after I have explained several times. For example, last semester I taught a student who struggled to understand the course content, which made me a bit impatient.

建議: 回答内容较好，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化表达，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel motivated rather than impatient. First, I make a clear plan and complete the task step by step, which gives me a sense of achievement.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和口语化表达，且内容不够连贯。建议避免口头语，使用更正式的表达，并注意语法准确。

範例: I don't have a job currently, but my major is accounting, which requires patience and caution because it involves analyzing data carefully.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Between the ages of 10 and 15, I was careless and often made many mistakes in math problems.

× I always put myself in others shoes.

✓ I always put myself in others' shoes.

这里的 'others shoes' 应该是所有格，表示“别人的鞋子”，需要加撇号变成 'others' shoes'。

× when someone try to teach me something I wish I wish they can be patient and gentle

✓ when someone tries to teach me something I wish they could be patient and gentle

主语 'someone' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 'try' 应该加 -s 变成 'tries'。另外，表达愿望时用虚拟语气，'can' 应改为 'could'。

× so when I'm teach something to others I'll be.

✓ so when I teach something to others, I'll be.

'I'm teach' 是错误的，现在时态中主语 'I' 后直接用动词原形 'teach'。

× While I feel impatient when someone can't understand my words for a long time.

✓ I feel impatient when someone can't understand my words for a long time.

句首的 'While' 用法不当，去掉更符合语境。

× I taught a student who can't understand my words about the academic the course,

✓ I taught a student who couldn't understand my words about the academic course,

时态不一致，过去时 'taught' 后面从句也应使用过去时 'couldn't'。另外，'the academic the course' 中多余一个 'the'。

× I feel a little bit impatient.

✓ I felt a little bit impatient.

描述过去的事情，谓语动词应使用过去时 'felt'。

× I want to set a exact plan and finish it step by step

✓ I want to set an exact plan and finish it step by step

'exact' 以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词应为 'an'。

× I feel motivated instead of impatience

✓ I feel motivated instead of impatience.

此句无明显语法错误，但 'impatience' 是名词，前面用 'instead of' 连接名词是正确的。此处保持不变。

× My major is accounting and accounting needs the patience and caution to do the job as it needs to analyze the data.

✓ My major is accounting, and accounting needs patience and caution to do the job as it needs to analyze data.

'the patience' 和 'the data' 中的定冠词 'the' 不必要，应去掉。

× I'm really a careless person, so when I encounter the math problems, I always make made every kind of mistakes on it.

✓ I was really a careless person, so when I encountered math problems, I always made every kind of mistake on them.

描述过去，动词应使用过去时 'was', 'encountered', 'made'。'every kind of mistakes' 应为单数 'mistake'。

× I always make made every kind of mistakes on it.

✓ I always made every kind of mistake in them.

'make mistakes on it' 不正确，应该用 'make mistakes in them'，表示在某些问题中犯错误。