耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复表达（"to be honest"出现两次），且"lose my temperature"表达不准确，应使用"lose my temper"。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的短语。

範例: I try to be a patient person, but sometimes I lose my temper when I have to rush.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如"if a kids"应为"if kids"，"it will me it will make me anger"表达混乱。建议注意主谓一致，句子结构清晰，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: It depends on the situation. For example, if kids are too noisy or naughty, it makes me angry. Also, I feel impatient when someone doesn't listen to me carefully.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如"I feel enjoyable"应为"I feel happy"或"I enjoy it"，句子不完整且逻辑混乱。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和主谓一致。

範例: I enjoy working on tasks for a long time because as a law student, spending time on a topic gives me a sense of achievement and helps me manage my work better.

建議: 回答中语法错误明显，如"my job require"应为"my job requires"，"patient can lead me become more focusing"表达不准确。建议使用正确的动词形式和更自然的表达。

範例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because patience helps me focus on details rather than just the general picture.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如"I become more patient when nowadays"应为"I am more patient nowadays"，"control my emotion"应为"control my emotions"。建议注意时态和复数形式。

範例: Definitely, I am more patient nowadays because I need to control my emotions, which also helps me get along well with others.

× For example if a kids are too noisy or naughty, it will me it will make me anger instead of being patient.

✓ For example, if kids are too noisy or naughty, it will make me angry instead of being patient.

“a kids”中“kids”是复数，前面不应该加不定冠词“a”，且“anger”应为形容词“angry”修饰“me”，所以应改为“kids”与“angry”。

× For example if a kids are too noisy or naughty, it will me it will make me anger instead of being patient.

✓ For example, if kids are too noisy or naughty, it will make me angry instead of being patient.

句中“it will me it will make me anger”结构混乱，重复且“me”位置错误，应删除多余部分并调整顺序。

× Secondly, if there's someone didn't listen to me carefully.

✓ Secondly, if someone doesn't listen to me carefully.

“there's someone didn't listen”结构错误，应该用“someone doesn't listen”表示现在时态的否定。

× I feel enjoyable when I have to do something for a long time because I'm a student majoring in law.

✓ I feel happy when I have to do something for a long time because I'm a student majoring in law.

“enjoyable”是形容事物的形容词，描述“我”的感受应使用“happy”或“enjoy it”等表达。

× Spend a long time for a typical topic.

✓ I spend a long time on a typical topic.

缺少主语，且介词使用错误，应补充主语并用“spend time on”固定搭配。

× It's makes me be.

✓ It makes me be.

主语“It”是单数，谓语动词应为“makes”，去掉多余的“'s”。

× It will give me a sense of achievement and management.

✓ It gives me a sense of achievement and management.

时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时“gives”，且“management”用词不当，建议改为“satisfaction”或“control”。

× Yes, my job require me to be patient and is necessary for us to be a patient person because patient can lead me become more focusing on the details instead of just generally.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient and it is necessary for us to be patient people because patience can help me become more focused on the details instead of just generally.

“job”是单数，谓语动词应为“requires”；“patient”应为名词“patience”；“lead me become”应为“help me become”；“focusing”应为“focused”；“generally”用法不当，应改为“generally”前加“just”。

× Definitely, I become more patient when nowadays since I need to be patient to control my emotion and it can also help me to get along well with other.

✓ Definitely, I have become more patient nowadays since I need to control my emotions and it can also help me get along well with others.

“become”时态错误，应为现在完成时“have become”；“when nowadays”结构错误，去掉“when”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”；“other”应为复数“others”。