耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免使用口语填充词如“umm”，并且句子结构应更完整和正式。可以直接表达观点并给出具体原因，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: I am not a very patient person because I tend to get frustrated when things go wrong or when others make mistakes.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。应注意主谓一致，避免口语化表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I feel impatient when people do not respect the agreed time, and also when I am stuck in traffic jams for a long time.

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性，句子结构混乱。应使用完整句子表达情感，并解释原因，避免语法错误。

範例: I usually feel upset and anxious when I have to do something for a long time because I lack perseverance.

建議: 回答中有过多口语填充词，语法和表达不够准确。应简洁明了地说明原因，并使用恰当词汇。

範例: Yes, being a student requires patience because studying hard and focusing on details for a long time is necessary to achieve good grades.

建議: 回答较长且有重复词汇，句子结构不够清晰。应简洁表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

範例: I am definitely more patient now because as I grow older, I have learned to accept things that are necessary and beneficial for my personal growth.

× while there might be several consequences, for instance when somebody don't obey the time that we made, I'll be a little bit anxious.

✓ while there might be several consequences, for instance when somebody doesn't obey the time that we made, I'll be a little bit anxious.

主语是单数'somebody'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'doesn't'，而不是'don't'。这是单复数不一致的问题。

× Also when there is like traffic jam and I have to wait for a long time, I'll be much easier to.

✓ Also when there is a traffic jam and I have to wait for a long time, I'll be much more impatient too.

短语'traffic jam'前缺少冠词'a'，应为'a traffic jam'。此外，'I'll be much easier to'表达不完整且不正确，应改为表达耐心减少的形容词，如'impatient'。

× Upset, anxious and sometimes angry I think.

✓ I think I feel upset, anxious and sometimes angry.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子结构不完整。应补充主语'I'和谓语'feel'，使句子完整。

× I think I'm not a person, have a good perseverance, so always I wouldn't choose to do things for a long time.

✓ I think I'm not a person who has good perseverance, so I usually wouldn't choose to do things for a long time.

'have a good perseverance'表达不正确，'perseverance'是不可数名词，前面不加冠词且应使用动词'has'。'always'位置不当，应改为'adverb usually'放在谓语前。

× studying for a great good grade needs a lot hard working and sometimes you just need to pay attention to small things for a long time.

✓ studying for a great grade needs a lot of hard work and sometimes you just need to pay attention to small things for a long time.

'a lot hard working'用法错误，应为'a lot of hard work'，'hard work'是不可数名词，且'working'用法不当。

× so it really requires me to, to never give up.

✓ so it really requires me to never give up.

重复使用' to'是不必要的，应删除多余的' to'。

× Definitely 'cause as I'm growing older and I met more things, more people then I get to know, sometimes I just need to accept those things because they are necessary and even sometimes they're they're good for me for my improvement.

✓ Definitely, because as I'm growing older and I meet more things and more people that I get to know, sometimes I just need to accept those things because they are necessary and sometimes they're even good for my improvement.

时态不一致，'met'应为现在时'meet'以保持时态一致。'they're they're'重复，应删除一个。'for me for my improvement'表达不自然，应改为'for my improvement'。