耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct in your sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I tend to get proceeded quickly', say 'I tend to get impatient quickly'.

範例: No, I am not a very patient person because I tend to get impatient when things don't happen as quickly as I expect. For instance, when I have to wait in a long queue, I often feel restless and want to leave. This is probably because I am naturally energetic and fast-paced.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I feel impatient when someone makes me wait for a long time because they are not punctual. For example, if a friend arrives late for a meeting, I get frustrated because I value my time.

建議: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases. Try to avoid repeating the same words and make your sentences clear and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I feel impatient and frustrated when I have to do a task that takes a long time. Since I am not a very patient person, I find it difficult to stay focused for extended periods.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: As a student, my studies require me to be patient and punctual. However, naturally, I am not a very patient person, so I have to work hard to develop these qualities.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains unnecessary details. Try to give a clear and direct answer with relevant supporting details. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I relied on others a lot, but now living alone has taught me to be more patient and independent.

× In my opinion, no, I'm not so very patient person because I tend to get proceeded quickly when things don't happen as fast as I expected.

✓ In my opinion, no, I'm not a very patient person because I tend to get irritated quickly when things don't happen as fast as I expected.

The phrase 'patient person' requires an article 'a' before it because 'person' is a singular countable noun. Also, 'get proceeded' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'get irritated' or 'get upset'. The correction adds the article and replaces the incorrect phrase to improve clarity.

× For example, when I'm waiting long tree, I often feel restless and want to live.

✓ For example, when I'm waiting a long time, I often feel restless and want to leave.

The phrase 'waiting long tree' is incorrect; it should be 'waiting a long time'. 'Tree' is a noun unrelated to time, and 'live' is likely a typo for 'leave'. The correction fixes the noun and verb to match the intended meaning.

× Can someone make me feel waited for so long time when they're not so on time then I feel so impatient about that thing.

✓ When someone makes me wait for a long time and they are not on time, I feel very impatient about that.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and verb forms. 'Make me feel waited' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me wait'. Also, 'so long time' should be 'a long time'. The correction adjusts prepositions and verb forms to standard usage.

× I feel so impatient and I feel so frustrated over things when someone gave me something to do for a very long time.

✓ I feel so impatient and frustrated when someone gives me something to do for a very long time.

The verb 'gave' is past tense, but the context is general or present, so 'gives' (present tense) is appropriate. Also, 'feel so frustrated over things' is simplified to 'feel frustrated' for clarity.

× It's not. I'm such a patient person so I get frustrated easily.

✓ I'm not such a patient person, so I get frustrated easily.

The phrase 'It's not' is incomplete and unclear. The correction removes it and adjusts the sentence to express the intended meaning clearly. Also, 'such a patient person' requires the article 'a' before 'patient person'.

× As a student it do helps me to be patient and be punctual but according to my nature I'm not so patient person.

✓ As a student, it does help me to be patient and punctual, but according to my nature, I'm not a very patient person.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'not so patient person' requires the article 'a' and an adverb 'very' for natural expression.

× As a student it do helps me to be patient and be punctual but according to my nature I'm not so patient person.

✓ As a student, it does help me to be patient and punctual, but according to my nature, I'm not a very patient person.

The phrase 'not so patient person' is missing the article 'a' before 'patient person' because 'person' is a singular countable noun.

× Yes, in my opinion I am more patient now when I uh rather than when I was a child, as when I was a child there were many people to look up to for me.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, I am more patient now than when I was a child, as when I was a child there were many people for me to look up to.

The phrase 'more patient now when I uh rather than' is awkward; 'more patient now than' is correct for comparison. Also, 'to look up to for me' should be 'for me to look up to' to correctly place the preposition.

× But now I'm just living alone in the outside of my area outside of my city, so I don't think so I'm more patient nowadays.

✓ But now I'm just living alone outside my area, outside my city, so I don't think I am more patient nowadays.

The phrase 'in the outside of' is incorrect; 'outside' does not require 'in the'. Also, 'I don't think so I'm more patient' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't think I am more patient' for proper sentence structure.