耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question about patience. Try to respond directly to the question first, then add supporting details if necessary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and relevant.

範例: No, I am not a very patient person because I tend to get frustrated easily. However, I try to stay positive by following a healthy diet and lifestyle.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not logically connect impatience with fast food. Try to give a clear reason why something makes you impatient, using linking words to explain your point.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for fast food because I get hungry quickly and the wait makes me restless.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use varied vocabulary and sentence structures.

範例: When I have to work for a long time, I usually feel tired. Therefore, I like to take a short break and drink a cup of black tea to refresh myself. Otherwise, I become bored and exhausted.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not clearly explain whether your job requires patience. Make sure to answer directly and provide supporting details with clear linking words.

範例: Yes, my studies require a lot of patience because I am in 12th grade studying medicine, which involves a lot of difficult subjects and long hours of study.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not logically explain why you are more patient now. Try to give a clear comparison between your childhood and now, using specific reasons and linking words.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better. As a child, my mother took care of me and provided a healthy diet, but now I manage things on my own.

× No, I am not a patient person because I have a healthy diet plan in my daily routine because healthy diet plan keep me healthy and positive in my life.

✓ No, I am not a patient person because I have a healthy diet plan in my daily routine because a healthy diet plan keeps me healthy and positive in my life.

The phrase 'healthy diet plan' is singular, so the verb should be 'keeps' instead of 'keep' to agree in number. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'healthy diet plan' to specify it as a singular countable noun.

× Basically the item is fast food, which make me impatient because fast food contain a lot of fatty acids.

✓ Basically the item is fast food, which makes me impatient because fast food contains a lot of fatty acids.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'fast food' (singular), so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make'. Also, 'fast food' is singular, so the verb should be 'contains' instead of 'contain' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× When I do any work in a long time I feel tired and then I prefer to take a cup of black tea because it provide me energy and I also take a nap.

✓ When I do any work for a long time I feel tired and then I prefer to take a cup of black tea because it provides me energy and I also take a nap.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; it should be 'for' to indicate duration. Also, 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× But if I do work hard I feel very boring and tired.

✓ But if I work hard I feel very bored and tired.

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes a feeling. Since the speaker is describing their own feeling, 'bored' is correct. Also, 'do work hard' is better expressed as 'work hard'.

× Yes I require to be a patient job because now I am in 12th class and I am studying from medical class.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because now I am in 12th class and I am studying in the medical stream.

'Require to be a patient job' is incorrect; it should be 'my job requires me to be patient'. Also, 'studying from medical class' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' and 'medical stream' is a more appropriate term.

× Yes, I am more patient now because now I am eat fast food from market like I like to eat burger and etcetera which could be me a patient but in a child my mother take care me and provide me a healthy diet.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now because I eat fast food from the market like burgers, etc., which could make me patient, but as a child my mother took care of me and provided me a healthy diet.

The verb 'am eat' is incorrect; it should be 'eat'. 'Burger' should be plural 'burgers' when talking generally. 'Could be me a patient' is incorrect; it should be 'could make me patient'. 'In a child' should be 'as a child'. 'Take care me' should be 'took care of me'. Verb tenses should be consistent and appropriate.