耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和用词不够准确，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和拼写错误，如"complained"应为"complaining"，"creasing"应为"crashing"。同时，句子结构可以更清晰，避免冗长。

範例: It depends. I am very patient when listening to a friend complaining for hours, but I get frustrated quickly when technology like apps crash or Wi-Fi stops working.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如"through queues"应为"waiting in queues"，"patience is a virtual"应为"patience is a virtue"。建议使用正确短语和表达，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Waiting in queues, slow internet, and elevators all make me feel impatient. I know patience is a virtue, but mine runs out quickly.

建議: 回答中时态使用不一致，且部分表达不准确，如"drives me up the world"应为"drives me up the wall"。建议注意时态一致性和常用表达，避免重复。

範例: Honestly, I get really impatient when I have to do something for a long time. Slow queues, slow internet, or elevators drive me up the wall. I just can't stand waiting around.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，如"My job involves counting money and giving receipts, so it doesn't require much patience."

範例: Not really. My job involves counting money and giving receipts, so I don't need to be very patient.

建議: 回答中语法错误明显，如缺少动词"am"，"lose my temporary"应为"lose my temper"，"older sensitive period"表达不准确。建议使用正确短语和完整句子。

範例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. I used to lose my temper easily because I was in a more sensitive period, but now I have come to realize the importance of patience.

× I can be super patient with people, like listening to a friend complained for hours, but when it comes to technology, apps creasing, Wi-Fi dying, I lost my mind in five seconds flat.

✓ I can be super patient with people, like listening to a friend complaining for hours, but when it comes to technology, apps crashing, Wi-Fi dying, I lose my mind in five seconds flat.

这里“complained”应使用现在分词形式“complaining”，因为它是动词“listening”的宾语补足语，表示正在进行的动作。类似地，“creasing”应改为“crashing”，因为“creasing”用法不当，且“apps crashing”更符合语境。最后，“I lost”应改为“I lose”，保持时态一致。

× apps creasing, Wi-Fi dying, I lost my mind in five seconds flat.

✓ apps crashing, Wi-Fi dying, I lose my mind in five seconds flat.

“creasing”不是正确的形容词或动词形式，应改为“crashing”，表示应用程序崩溃。

× Through queues, through Internet, slow elevators, basically anything slow drives me crazy.

✓ Through queues, through the Internet, slow elevators, basically anything slow drives me crazy.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”，因为特指互联网。

× Through queues, through Internet, slow elevators, basically anything slow drives me crazy.

✓ Through queues, through the Internet, slow elevators, basically anything slow drives me crazy.

“Internet”作为特指名词，前面需要加定冠词“the”。

× I know patience is a virtual but mines comes with a ticking clock.

✓ I know patience is a virtue but mine comes with a ticking clock.

“virtual”应为“virtue”，表示美德；“mines”应为“mine”，表示“我的”，这里是所有格代词。

× Honestly, I got really impatient when I have to do something for a long time.

✓ Honestly, I get really impatient when I have to do something for a long time.

句子描述的是一般情况，应使用一般现在时“get”，而非过去时“got”。

× Slow queues, slow Internet or even slow elevators drives me up the world.

✓ Slow queues, slow Internet or even slow elevators drive me up the wall.

主语是复数“queues”和“elevators”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“drive”。另外，“up the world”应为习语“up the wall”。

× Slow queues, slow Internet or even slow elevators drives me up the world.

✓ Slow queues, slow Internet or even slow elevators drive me up the wall.

习语应为“drive me up the wall”，表示使人非常烦躁。

× We stand waiting around and it makes me feel furious.

✓ I stand waiting around and it makes me feel furious.

前文主语为“I”，此处应保持一致，使用“I”而非“We”。

× Well not really, my job is counting just collecting money and give a paper for it.

✓ Well, not really. My job is just counting, collecting money and giving a paper for it.

句子缺少逗号和句号，且动词形式不一致，应统一使用动名词形式“counting”，“collecting”，“giving”。

× So I think it's yes, don't need some.

✓ So I think it's yes, I don't need to be patient.

“don't need some”表达不清，应明确表达“不需要有耐心”，使用完整句子。

× Yeah, I definitely more patient than when I was a kid.

✓ Yeah, I am definitely more patient than when I was a kid.

缺少系动词“am”，导致句子不完整。

× Back then I used to lose my temporary over things because I was in older sensitive period.

✓ Back then I used to lose my temper over things because I was in an older sensitive period.

“temporary”应为“temper”，表示脾气；“older sensitive period”前应加不定冠词“an”。

× Back then I used to lose my temporary over things because I was in older sensitive period.

✓ Back then I used to lose my temper over things because I was in an older sensitive period.

“sensitive period”前应加不定冠词“an”，表示某一时期。

× But now I'm come to realize.

✓ But now I've come to realize.

“I'm come”结构错误，应使用现在完成时“I've come”表示“我已经意识到”。