耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且直接，但细节描述不够具体，且句子结构稍显简单。建议丰富细节，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because when I was in primary school, I used to wait for my dad every Friday for over three hours after school, which taught me a lot about patience.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且内容重复。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

範例: I feel impatient when I meet people who are difficult to communicate with because they don't understand me well, which makes conversations frustrating.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并补充具体感受。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel calm and focused because I prefer to stay composed rather than get emotional.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，内容缺乏具体说明。建议明确说明工作中耐心的重要性，并使用正确语法。

範例: Yes, as a future computer engineer, I will need to be patient because solving complex problems often takes time and careful attention.

建議: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构简单。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to stay calm in school and at home, which helps me make important decisions.

× If I meet some people who is silly, I can tolerate them because I think silly people is is a kind of uncommunicate.

✓ If I meet some people who are silly, I can tolerate them because I think silly people are a kind of uncommunicative.

这里的主语是复数people，谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是is。还有形容词uncommunicate应改为形容词uncommunicative。

× I think silly people is is a kind of uncommunicate.

✓ I think silly people are a kind of uncommunicative.

形容词uncommunicate用法错误，正确形式是uncommunicative，表示“难以沟通的”。

× It's so hard for me to communicate with them.

✓ It's so hard for me to communicate with them.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Uh, I'm not the kind of people who will have big wave of emotion.

✓ Uh, I'm not the kind of person who will have big waves of emotion.

短语the kind of后面应接单数person而非复数people，且big wave应为复数big waves。

× I am the that kind of person who is.

✓ I am that kind of person.

句子结构不完整，去掉多余的the和who is，使句子完整通顺。

× I think that's a job that's needing talk too much and I need to become at work to make sure.

✓ I think that's a job that needs a lot of talking and I need to be patient at work to make sure.

动词need后应接动词ing形式talking，且表达“需要很多谈话”应使用a lot of talking。become at work用法错误，应为be patient at work。

× Yes, When I'm getting older, I'm getting more peace.

✓ Yes, as I get older, I become more peaceful.

表达随着年龄增长应使用一般现在时，get older和become more peaceful更符合习惯用法。

× I stay calm in my school and in my family, so I I'm the main people to do the important decision.

✓ I stay calm at my school and in my family, so I am the main person to make important decisions.

the main people应为the main person，decision应为复数decisions，且介词in my school改为at my school更合适。