耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit indirect and includes unnecessary phrases like 'You can judge me anyway in any way.' Try to respond directly and naturally to the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in difficult situations.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some hesitations and informal fillers like 'you know'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

範例: I usually stay patient, but I become impatient when people take advantage of my patience or when I am in a hurry.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and informal. Try to use more formal vocabulary and avoid repeating the same ideas. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I feel frustrated when I have to do the same task for a long time because it becomes monotonous, and I believe taking breaks is important to stay focused.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and be specific about your job requirements.

範例: Yes, my job as a documentation officer and consultant requires me to be patient because I often interact with many different people at the reception.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and avoid using unclear words like 'monodomous'. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

範例: I was more patient as a child, but now I feel less patient because of the stress from education, work, and relationships.

× Well it's not good to praise your own self in front of others, but to be honest, I'm a patient person.

✓ Well, it's not good to praise yourself in front of others, but to be honest, I'm a patient person.

The reflexive pronoun 'your own self' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'yourself' to refer back to the subject 'you'.

× You can judge me anyway in any way.

✓ You can judge me anyway you want.

The phrase 'in any way' is redundant and awkward here; 'anyway you want' is a more natural and correct expression.

× I'm usually a patient person, but at times when people are taking advantage of your patient level, then at that time I used to be impatient or, or when it is, you know, I am in hurry, then that time as well, I became impatient.

✓ I'm usually a patient person, but at times when people take advantage of my patience, I become impatient. Also, when I am in a hurry, I become impatient as well.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's patience. Also, tense consistency and sentence clarity are improved.

× Well, at that time I feel frustrated because I don't wanna do the same thing over and over again and again for a longer time.

✓ Well, at that time I feel frustrated because I don't want to do the same thing over and over again for a long time.

The phrase 'for a longer time' is awkward; 'for a long time' is the correct expression. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× You know, people need a break from a thing which is repetitive or you know, which turns to be out for a longer duration.

✓ You know, people need a break from things that are repetitive or that last for a long duration.

The phrase 'a thing which is repetitive' is awkward; 'things that are repetitive' is more natural. Also, 'turns to be out' is incorrect; 'last for' is the correct expression.

× Yes, of course, I am a documentation officer and a consultancy and I have to sometimes handle the reception area as well.

✓ Yes, of course, I am a documentation officer and a consultant, and I sometimes have to handle the reception area as well.

'Consultancy' is a noun meaning a business or service; the correct word for a person is 'consultant'. Also, word order and article usage are corrected.

× So people used to come with all over the all sorts of people used to come there.

✓ So all sorts of people used to come there.

The phrase 'used to come with all over the all sorts of people used to come there' is redundant and incorrect; simplified to 'all sorts of people used to come there' for clarity.

× So I have to be patient for the business as well.

✓ So I have to be patient with the business as well.

The correct preposition with 'patient' is 'with', not 'for'.

× Actually, when I was child, I was patient at that time more than I am now.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I was more patient then than I am now.

The article 'a' is missing before 'child'. Also, word order is corrected for natural English expression.

× Nowadays, because of different thought, different things which keep going on in your mind such as your education, your work, your relations with others make you feel frustrated and monodomous, which which is why I'm not patient anymore like I'm in.

✓ Nowadays, because of different thoughts and things that keep going on in your mind, such as your education, your work, and your relationships with others, you feel frustrated and monotonous, which is why I'm not as patient anymore as I used to be.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts'. 'Relations' is better as 'relationships'. 'Monodomous' is incorrect; the correct word is 'monotonous'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.