耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons or examples. Avoid unfinished sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even when things don't go as planned. For example, when I face delays at work, I try to remain composed and find solutions.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Provide a full sentence that directly answers the question, then explain with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I feel impatient when I follow all the rules and work hard, but my efforts go unnoticed, especially at work. This makes me frustrated because I expect recognition for my dedication.

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely, using linking words to connect your points. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

範例: I don't like tasks that take a long time because I prefer to complete my work promptly. Therefore, I try to finish tasks as soon as possible instead of postponing them.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some repetition and minor errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I need to stay calm and focused. Although it's not my dream job, I do it to support my family and always try my best.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear. Provide a complete response with clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid unfinished sentences.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because experience has taught me how to control my emotions and stay calm in difficult situations.

× I can tell you I'm a patient person, but sometimes I have power and I find power in myself to be patient when things don't go right for me. But if the if.

✓ I can tell you I'm a patient person, but sometimes I have to find strength in myself to be patient when things don't go right for me.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing, especially the phrase 'But if the if.' It lacks clear structure and meaning. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by replacing 'have power and I find power in myself' with 'have to find strength in myself' and removing the incomplete phrase. This improves sentence clarity and coherence.

× I get impatient when I do everything by the rules. Maybe at work I try my best but no one sees it and in. Personal.

✓ I get impatient when I do everything by the rules. Maybe at work I try my best but no one sees it, even in my personal life.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'and in. Personal.' which is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought by adding 'even in my personal life,' making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I don't like such things. I prefer to do something on time and not to get into for tomorrow. I prefer do it right now as I can, as I afford and try my best to do it right now when the task is to be completed and.

✓ I don't like such things. I prefer to do something on time and not leave it for tomorrow. I prefer to do it right now as I can, as I am able, and try my best to complete the task promptly.

The original sentences contain incomplete phrases and awkward expressions such as 'not to get into for tomorrow' and ending with 'and.' The correction replaces these with clearer and grammatically correct expressions, improving sentence flow and clarity.

× My job requires me to be patient, to be calm, to do my work with patient and to do my best to try my best.

✓ My job requires me to be patient, to be calm, to do my work patiently, and to try my best.

The phrase 'to do my work with patient' is incorrect because 'patient' is an adjective, but an adverb 'patiently' is needed to describe how the work is done. Also, 'to do my best to try my best' is redundant. The correction uses 'patiently' and removes redundancy for grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× And 'cause it's not the job I love, it's the job I have to do because I need it, because I need to earn money for my family.

✓ Because it's not the job I love, it's the job I have to do since I need it and need to earn money for my family.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be incorrect in formal speech. Also, using 'because' repeatedly can be stylistically weak. The correction replaces 'And 'cause' with 'Because' and combines the reasons with 'since' and 'and' for better sentence structure and flow.

× Sure, I'm more patient now when I was a child, when I was a student of the university or when I was studying at school.

✓ Sure, I'm more patient now than when I was a child, when I was a university student or when I was studying at school.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'when' instead of 'than' to make a comparison. The correction replaces 'when' with 'than' to correctly compare patience now with the past. Also, 'student of the university' is better expressed as 'university student' for natural phrasing.