耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in stressful situations. Moreover, I can multitask without getting frustrated."

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in stressful situations. Moreover, I can multitask without getting frustrated.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I feel impatient when I have to wait for something or someone, especially if the delay is unexpected. For instance, I get restless when I am stuck in traffic because I like to use my time productively."

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for something or someone, especially if the delay is unexpected. For instance, I get restless when I am stuck in traffic because I like to use my time productively.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I usually feel tired and a bit bored when I have to do the same work for a long time. Therefore, I like to take breaks to stay focused. However, if the task is interesting, I remain motivated."

範例: I usually feel tired and a bit bored when I have to do the same work for a long time. Therefore, I like to take breaks to stay focused. However, if the task is interesting, I remain motivated.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific details. For example, "Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I handle several tasks throughout the day. Many projects need patience due to their lengthy descriptions and complex requirements."

範例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I handle several tasks throughout the day. Many projects need patience due to their lengthy descriptions and complex requirements.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and could be clearer. Try to use correct verb forms and link your ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because many things used to frustrate me. However, over time, I have matured and become more patient due to the daily tasks and responsibilities in my routine."

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because many things used to frustrate me. However, over time, I have matured and become more patient due to the daily tasks and responsibilities in my routine.

× I consider myself as a patient person because I can stay calm even in very stress things and I can also do several things without getting frustrated and also I use to chose some other.

✓ I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in very stressful situations and I can also do several things without getting frustrated and also I used to choose some others.

The phrase 'use to chose' is incorrect; it should be 'used to choose' because 'used to' indicates a past habit and 'choose' is the base form of the verb. Also, 'stress' should be 'stressful' to correctly modify 'things'. The word 'as' after 'consider myself' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I consider myself as a patient person because I can stay calm even in very stress things and I can also do several things without getting frustrated and also I use to chose some other.

✓ I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in very stressful things and I can also do several things without getting frustrated and also I used to choose some others.

The adjective 'stress' is incorrectly used; it should be 'stressful' to describe 'things' properly.

× I feel impatient when I have to wait for something or someone. Especially the delay is unexpected and for example I have to wait in the traffic. I get restless because I love to use my.

✓ I feel impatient when I have to wait for something or someone, especially when the delay is unexpected. For example, I have to wait in traffic. I get restless because I love to use my time.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Wait in the traffic' should be 'wait in traffic' as 'traffic' is uncountable here. Also, the phrase 'I love to use my' is incomplete; it should specify what is being used, such as 'my time'.

× I feel impatient when I have to wait for something or someone. Especially the delay is unexpected and for example I have to wait in the traffic. I get restless because I love to use my.

✓ I feel impatient when I have to wait for something or someone, especially when the delay is unexpected. For example, I have to wait in traffic. I get restless because I love to use my time.

The preposition 'in' before 'traffic' is correct, but 'the traffic' is incorrect; 'traffic' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, the sentence structure needs improvement for clarity.

× I usually feel quite tired and a bit bored because of the same work for the long time because it find me a a very uninterested person on that ****. Because I love to take breaks to stay focused. If it's very interested I stay motivated.

✓ I usually feel quite tired and a bit bored because of doing the same work for a long time. It makes me a very uninterested person in that task. I love to take breaks to stay focused. If it's very interesting, I stay motivated.

The original sentences have multiple issues: 'because of the same work for the long time' should be 'because of doing the same work for a long time'; 'it find me' should be 'it makes me'; 'uninterested person on that ****' is unclear and corrected to 'uninterested person in that task'; 'If it's very interested' should be 'If it's very interesting'. Also, sentence fragments are corrected to complete sentences.

× Yes, my job require me to be patient because there are several task in the whole day in my office. A lot of project needs patience because of the lengthy lengthy descriptions and also there are a lot of.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because there are several tasks throughout the day in my office. A lot of projects need patience because of the lengthy descriptions and also there are a lot of others.

The subject 'job' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires' not 'require'. 'Task' and 'project' should be plural as 'several' and 'a lot of' indicate more than one. The phrase 'lengthy lengthy' is repetitive and corrected to a single 'lengthy'. The sentence ending with 'there are a lot of' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× Yes, I feel more patient now than when I were a child because there are several things that get frustrated me. But now according to the time I get matured and patient person because of the daily task and responsibilities having in my daily routine.

✓ Yes, I feel more patient now than when I was a child because there were several things that used to frustrate me. But now, over time, I have matured and become a patient person because of the daily tasks and responsibilities in my routine.

The verb 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. 'Get frustrated me' is incorrect; it should be 'used to frustrate me'. 'I get matured' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have matured' or 'I have become mature'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'daily' and 'responsibilities'.