耐心— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
To be honest, I'm not a patient person. I can easily lose my patience because of my bad temper. But I have learned some ways to control my temper and it has some positive effect.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
Well there are many things that can make me feel impatient on. For example when I study and there is a problem that I can't work out even I have tried for a long time then I will be ready in frustrated and upset then I will lose my patience.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
Well, I have to do something for a long time. Firstly, I will worry that whether I can persist for such a long time and secondly, I'm I may feel anxious and nervous because I'm not sure if I will lose my patience.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Yes, my job requires me to be patient so I have struggled for a long time to search for methods that can help me stay focused and patient. And now there has been some improvement on my control of the temper and the now I can stay patient for.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, when I was a child I often running around screaming and shouting. This and this often confused my parents. But no, I'm more patient in study and aspects of life.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为自然且直接，但表达略显重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和单复数一致。
範例: To be honest, I'm not very patient because of my bad temper. However, I have learned some methods to control it, which have helped me improve.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子过长且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。
範例: Many things make me impatient. For example, when I study and encounter a difficult problem that I can't solve after trying for a long time, I feel frustrated and lose my patience.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，且逻辑连接不够清晰。建议理清思路，使用恰当的连接词，并避免重复表达。
範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I worry about whether I can persist. Also, I may feel anxious because I'm unsure if I can stay patient.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。
範例: Yes, my job requires patience. I have worked hard to find ways to stay focused and calm, and now I have improved a lot.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，且部分句子不完整。建议注意时态和语法，避免重复，并使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to run around screaming, which confused my parents. Now, I am more patient in my studies and daily life.
文法
× I will be ready in frustrated and upset then I will lose my patience.
✓ I will be ready to be frustrated and upset, then I will lose my patience.
这里“ready in frustrated and upset”结构不正确，应该用不定式表达准备做某事，即“ready to be frustrated and upset”。
× Well there are many things that can make me feel impatient on.
✓ Well, there are many things that can make me feel impatient.
“impatient”后不需要介词“on”，直接用形容词即可。
× And now there has been some improvement on my control of the temper and the now I can stay patient for.
✓ And now there has been some improvement in my control of my temper, and now I can stay patient.
“improvement on”应改为“improvement in”，表示“在……方面的改善”；“control of the temper”应为“control of my temper”；句尾“stay patient for”不完整，应去掉“for”。
× I'm I may feel anxious and nervous because I'm not sure if I will lose my patience.
✓ I may feel anxious and nervous because I'm not sure if I will lose my patience.
句中“I'm I”重复且错误，应删除多余的“I'm”。
× For example, when I was a child I often running around screaming and shouting.
✓ For example, when I was a child I often ran around screaming and shouting.
“I often running”中“running”应为动词过去式“ran”，因为描述过去的习惯动作。
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