耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接支持细节，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: No, I am not a patient person. When I encounter a problem, I feel nervous and frustrated if I cannot solve it immediately. This often makes me feel impatient, so I am trying to improve this.

建議: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，缺乏具体细节。建议明确列举一两个具体原因，并用连词连接，使回答更有条理。

範例: I feel impatient when I get lower scores than I expect in exams. Also, I become impatient if I have to wait a long time for something to be cleared or finished.

建議: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用简单句直接表达感受，并举例说明，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

範例: I feel nervous and frustrated when I have to do something for a long time. Also, multitasking makes me less efficient because I get distracted easily.

建議: 回答内容不明确，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明工作内容和耐心的关系，使用正确的词汇。

範例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I have to work alone at the computer for long hours, which can be tiring.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议直接比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并说明原因，句子要简洁连贯。

範例: I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities like work and study, which make me feel stressed.

× when I made some problem, if I can solve for it immediately I will feel nervous and mad.

✓ when I make some problems, if I can solve them immediately I will feel nervous and mad.

这里的“problem”应该用复数形式“problems”，因为表示不止一个问题。同时，“solve for it”是不正确的搭配，应该直接用“solve them”。

× if I can solve for it immediately I will feel nervous and mad.

✓ if I can solve it immediately I will feel nervous and mad.

动词“solve”后不需要介词“for”，直接加宾语即可。

× So the I think it is a problem for Maine becauses always made me feel faster frustration, so I have to change it.

✓ So I think it is a problem for me because it always makes me feel faster frustration, so I have to change it.

“Maine”应为“me”，且“frustration”前应加冠词“faster frustration”表达不准确，建议改为“feel frustrated more quickly”。

× becauses always made me feel faster frustration

✓ because it always makes me feel frustrated faster

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，且“made”时态不对，应为一般现在时“makes”。

× There are significant amount of four things that I can't that can make me feel impatient such as if I got a better score exams I will feel sad and impatient and if or when I cleared sometimes before it's clear along time and etc.

✓ There are a significant number of things that can make me feel impatient, such as if I get better exam scores I will feel sad and impatient, and sometimes when I have to wait a long time before something is clear, etc.

“amount”用于不可数名词，复数名词应用“number”；“four things”与“significant amount”搭配不当；“score exams”应为“exam scores”；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× if I got a better score exams I will feel sad and impatient

✓ if I get better exam scores I will feel sad and impatient

条件句中表示一般现在时，不能用过去式“got”，应使用“get”。

× sometimes before it's clear along time and etc.

✓ sometimes when it takes a long time to be clear, etc.

“before it's clear along time”表达不正确，应改为“when it takes a long time to be clear”。

× it's always detect main non time to do this

✓ it always takes me a long time to do this

“detect main non time”无意义，应改为“takes me a long time”，表达耗时。

× and if I come to do multi task, I will feel it's a note so efficient because this is my uh, personalities and correct correct ticks.

✓ and if I have to do multitasking, I will feel it's not so efficient because of my personality and habits.

“come to do multi task”表达错误，应为“have to do multitasking”；“note”应为“not”；“personalities and correct correct ticks”应为“personality and habits”。

× So it's mainly always unable to.

✓ So I am usually unable to do it efficiently.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整。

× So it's a required me to be patient.

✓ So it requires me to be patient.

“required”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“requires”，且主语是“it”，谓语动词应与主语一致。

× I have to sit down on the trail and face the computer alone a whole day.

✓ I have to sit at the desk and face the computer alone for a whole day.

“sit down on the trail”表达错误，应为“sit at the desk”；“a whole day”前应加介词“for”。

× And then you know, I when I was a child, I all I feel very relaxed and not other things becauses I have do nothing especially except studying.

✓ When I was a child, I felt very relaxed and didn't have other things to worry about because I did nothing except studying.

“I all I feel”表达错误，应为“I felt”；“becauses I have do nothing”应为“because I did nothing”；时态应统一为过去时。

× But now I have to handle a lot of things such as working, studying and the other things that be of such as.

✓ But now I have to handle a lot of things such as working, studying, and other responsibilities.

句子结尾不完整，“that be of such as”无意义，应删去或改为“and other responsibilities”。