耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows good intent but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific examples.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm in stressful situations. For instance, I often help my friends and family by listening to their problems and advising them on how to manage their emotions.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' properly, and try to be more concise and clear.

範例: I feel impatient in situations like waiting in long queues at supermarkets or banks because I feel like I am wasting my time. For example, standing in line for a long time makes me frustrated.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

範例: To be honest, I feel frustrated and annoyed when I have to do the same task for a long time because it becomes monotonous. However, if that happens in the future, I will take breaks to stay focused.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on forming complete, coherent sentences and avoid unnecessary words. Use linking words to explain why patience is important in your job.

範例: Definitely, my job requires a lot of patience. I work in optometry cleaning, where I need to talk with customers and listen carefully to their concerns. Therefore, being patient is essential to provide good service.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons using proper sentence structure.

範例: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because my current job in optometry cleaning requires me to listen to patients' concerns carefully, which has helped me develop patience.

× I am patient person because I can stay calm in stressful situation.

✓ I am a patient person because I can stay calm in stressful situations.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'patient person', and 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the general context. In English, singular countable nouns require an article, and when referring to general cases, plural form is appropriate.

× Even I often have my friends and parents in their problems to steak and how to control their on their emotions.

✓ Even I often help my friends and parents with their problems to stay calm and control their emotions.

The original sentence misuses 'have' and 'steak' (likely intended 'stay'), and the preposition 'in' is incorrect here. The verb 'help' is appropriate with 'with their problems'. Also, 'on their emotions' should be 'control their emotions'. Correct prepositions and verbs improve clarity.

× there are several things which makes me feel impatient such as long queues in front of supermarket or bands

✓ there are several things which make me feel impatient such as long queues in front of supermarkets or buses

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'things' (plural), so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'supermarket' should be plural 'supermarkets' to match the general context, and 'bands' is likely a typo for 'buses' or 'bands' is incorrect here.

× because I'm feeling at that time I'm wasting my time and I easily got frustrated during that situation.

✓ because I feel that I am wasting my time and I easily get frustrated during that situation.

The phrase 'I'm feeling at that time' is awkward; 'I feel that' is more natural. Also, 'got frustrated' should be present tense 'get frustrated' to match the context. Correct verb tense and preposition usage improve sentence flow.

× Meant to be honest if I have to do something for a long time.

✓ To be honest, if I have to do something for a long time,

The phrase 'Meant to be honest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'To be honest'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I feel like I I feel very frustrated and annoyed because if I'm doing the same thing for a long period of time I can become monotone's

✓ I feel very frustrated and annoyed because if I'm doing the same thing for a long period of time, I can become monotonous.

The word 'monotone's' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'monotonous'. Also, the repeated 'I feel' is redundant. Correct adjective usage and sentence clarity are important.

× but if for example in future if I have that situation so I will take a break.

✓ but if, for example, in the future I have that situation, I will take a break.

The phrase needs commas for clarity, and 'in future' should be 'in the future'. Proper punctuation and article usage improve readability.

× Currently I'm working in optometry cleaning where I have to talk with customers and also listen to their concerns.

✓ Currently I'm working in optometry cleaning, where I have to talk to customers and also listen to their concerns.

The correct preposition with 'talk' in this context is 'to' not 'with'. Also, a comma before 'where' improves sentence structure.

× At that time the patient is very essential for me.

✓ At that time, patience is very essential for me.

The word 'patient' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'patience' (noun). Also, a comma after 'At that time' improves readability.

× Besides this I have also. Give my patience level, hide during when I'm.

✓ Besides this, I also try to maintain my patience level during difficult times.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I believe so, I am more told RUNT right now as compared to my younger age because currently I am working the optometric cleaning.

✓ I believe so, I am more tolerant right now compared to when I was younger because I am currently working in optometric cleaning.

The phrase 'more told RUNT' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'more tolerant'. Also, 'working the optometric cleaning' should be 'working in optometric cleaning'. Correct word choice and preposition usage are necessary.

× So I'm have to talk and some of the concerns of the patient so as compared to the past.

✓ So I have to talk to patients and address some of their concerns compared to the past.

The phrase 'I'm have to' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to'. Also, 'talk and some of the concerns' is unclear; it should be 'talk to patients and address some of their concerns'. Proper verb forms and prepositions improve clarity.