耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够简洁，句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, my friends often say that I stay calm during their arguments and help explain things clearly, which shows my patience.

建議: 回答内容不够连贯，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达原因，并避免语法错误。

範例: I feel impatient when I am stuck in traffic because I worry about being late. Also, I get annoyed when people don't follow rules in group activities.

建議: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接表达感受，并用具体原因支持，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I often worry about the results. If the outcome is not good, I feel frustrated and anxious.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体例子说明耐心的重要性。

範例: I am a student studying fashion communication. My studies require patience, especially when working on projects involving promotion and photography, which take a lot of time and communication.

建議: 回答较为口语化且有语法错误。建议用更正式和连贯的句子表达对比，并具体说明耐心的变化。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, my parents did many things for me, but now that I am more independent, I can handle long and time-consuming tasks patiently.

× You know friends around me sometimes they got a quarrel hand, they just says that I seldomly involved in that so that they think I'm just with great patience while guiding someone or explaining something to the others and they think that is a kind of a great personal traits on me.

✓ You know, friends around me sometimes get into quarrels, they just say that I am seldom involved in that so they think I have great patience while guiding someone or explaining something to others, and they think that is a kind of great personal trait of mine.

这里存在单复数错误，例如“friends”后面动词应为复数形式“get”，而不是“got”；“quarrel hand”应为“get into quarrels”；“says”应为复数形式“say”；“traits”应为单数“trait”，因为前面用的是“a kind of”。需要注意主谓一致和名词单复数的正确使用。

× they just says that I seldomly involved in that so that they think I'm just with great patience while guiding someone or explaining something to the others

✓ they just say that I am seldom involved in that so they think I have great patience while guiding someone or explaining something to others

副词“seldomly”位置和形式使用不当，正确用法是“seldom”作为频率副词，且应放在动词前面；另外，“just”位置不当，应去掉或调整。

× Well, I think there was some specific issues like when is the traffic congestion and I'm quite worried about punctuality or about some things like when kidding out that some people just get into the groups, into their friends and they just don't follow the rules.

✓ Well, I think there are some specific issues like when there is traffic congestion and I'm quite worried about punctuality or about some things like when kidding around, some people just get into groups with their friends and they just don't follow the rules.

时态使用错误，“was”应改为“are”表示一般现在时；“when is the traffic congestion”应为“when there is traffic congestion”；“kidding out”应为“kidding around”；“get into the groups, into their friends”表达不清，应为“get into groups with their friends”。

× some people just get into the groups, into their friends and they just don't follow the rules.

✓ some people just get into groups with their friends and they just don't follow the rules.

介词使用错误，“get into the groups, into their friends”应改为“get into groups with their friends”，表示“进入某个群体”。

× I think this is quite annoying and.

✓ I think this is quite annoying.

句子结构不完整，句尾多余“and”，应去掉以形成完整句子。

× Well, I think I'll just worry the outcomes like if this like the task as I so time consuming, I just worry about whether it will like.

✓ Well, I think I'll just worry about the outcomes, like if this task is so time-consuming, I just worry about whether it will...

动词后缺少介词“about”，且“time consuming”应为形容词短语“time-consuming”；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I just worry the outcomes like if this like the task as I so time consuming, I just worry about whether it will like.

✓ I just worry about the outcomes, like if this task is so time-consuming, I just worry about whether it will...

“worry”后应接介词“about”，表示“担心某事”。

× It made the great in facts on the outcomes and if it's not good I think I just feel frustrating and just annoyed or anxious.

✓ It has a great impact on the outcomes, and if it's not good, I think I just feel frustrated and just annoyed or anxious.

“made the great in facts”表达错误，应为“has a great impact”；“frustrating”是形容词，表示令人沮丧的，应改为“frustrated”表示感到沮丧。

× What I'm a student right now at school and imagining fashion communication.

✓ I am a student right now at school, majoring in fashion communication.

句子缺少谓语动词，且“imagining”用法错误，应为“majoring in”表示专业。

× But As for the questions like whatever patience is is reliable for me, I think is yes, definitely like when you're doing a project that related to promotion and photography, I'll just say it's just quite time consuming with the discussions and communicate.

✓ But as for the question of whether patience is required for me, I think yes, definitely. Like when you're doing a project related to promotion and photography, I'd say it's quite time-consuming with the discussions and communication.

连词使用错误，“whatever”应为“whether”；“is is reliable for me”表达不清，应为“is required for me”；“communicate”应为名词“communication”。

× But nowadays as I got more independent, I think is quite normal to do the long, long time tasks or the time-consuming ones.

✓ But nowadays, as I have become more independent, I think it is quite normal to do long, time-consuming tasks.

“tasks”前不需要“the”，且“long, long time tasks”表达重复，应简化为“long, time-consuming tasks”；“I think is”缺少主语，应为“I think it is”。