耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to form a clear, concise response with proper verb forms and sentence structure.

範例: Honestly, no, I'm not a very patient person because I often rush to finish tasks quickly. Sometimes I regret not taking my time, but I'm still working on improving my patience.

建議: Use complete sentences and avoid filler words. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to repeat the same work multiple times because it becomes boring and tedious, which makes me lose interest quickly.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid fragmented sentences and use linking words to explain your feelings clearly.

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel tired and unmotivated. For example, as a high school student, thinking about sitting in school for eight hours makes me feel reluctant to go.

建議: Use complete sentences and avoid hesitation sounds. Clarify your points with proper linking words and vocabulary.

範例: As a high school student, my 'job' requires a lot of patience because I need to stay focused for eight hours while completing repetitive and sometimes boring tasks.

建議: Work on sentence fluency and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to compare past and present and express your opinion clearly.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I have improved a lot, but I believe I can still be better by focusing more on important tasks instead of getting distracted by my phone.

× sometimes I is full in rush to do things

✓ sometimes I am in a rush to do things

The subject 'I' requires the singular verb 'am' instead of 'is'. Also, the phrase 'full in rush' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in a rush'.

× I would be rushing, rushing, rushing and.

✓ I would be rushing, rushing, rushing.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Sometimes I feel sorry I need you so down my steps but.

✓ Sometimes I feel sorry; I need to slow down my steps, but.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I need you so down my steps' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to slow down my steps'. Adding a semicolon and correcting the phrase improves clarity and grammar.

× Like repeating. Repeating works would make me feel very impatient

✓ Like repeating. Repeating work would make me feel very impatient

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context and should not be pluralized.

× because you need to to do it over and over again

✓ because you need to do it over and over again

There is a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the sentence.

× so it just make me feel impatient

✓ so it just makes me feel impatient

The subject 'it' is singular and requires the verb 'makes' (third person singular) instead of 'make'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I just unconsciously field, don't want to do it.

✓ I just unconsciously feel I don't want to do it.

The word 'field' is a typo and should be 'feel'. Also, the sentence needs a conjunction 'I' before 'don't want to do it' to be grammatically correct.

× when I think about I need to stay in the school and sit there for 8 hours

✓ when I think about needing to stay at school and sit there for 8 hours

The phrase 'think about I need' is incorrect; it should be 'think about needing'. Also, 'in the school' is better expressed as 'at school' in this context.

× I just feel. So offset and don't want to go to school at all.

✓ I just feel so upset and don't want to go to school at all.

The word 'offset' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'upset'. Also, the period after 'feel' is unnecessary and breaks the sentence.

× it's a highly required. Precision for being patient and.

✓ it highly requires precision for being patient, and

The phrase 'it's a highly required. Precision' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it highly requires precision'. Also, the period after 'required' is incorrect and breaks the sentence.

× We need to. Uh, stay focus for 8 hours in just taking those boring tasks.

✓ We need to stay focused for 8 hours just doing those boring tasks.

The phrase 'stay focus' should be 'stay focused'. Also, 'in just taking' is incorrect; 'just doing' is more appropriate here.

× Well, I will say yes, I improved a lot with my patience E but.

✓ Well, I would say yes, I have improved a lot with my patience, but

The modal verb 'will' is not appropriate here; 'would' is better for expressing opinion. Also, 'improved' should be in present perfect 'have improved' to indicate experience up to now. The letter 'E' seems to be a typo and is removed.

× I still can be better than this, like I believe that I can be more focused on.

✓ I still can be better than this; I believe that I can be more focused on things

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'things' after 'focused on' completes the sentence. Also, a semicolon improves sentence structure.

× instead of sometimes growing on my phone.

✓ instead of sometimes growing on my phone.

The phrase 'growing on my phone' is incorrect; likely intended 'scrolling on my phone'. However, since 'growing' is not in the grammar problem list, no correction is made here.