耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够简洁，句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复和冗长，使用更地道的表达。

範例: No, I am not a very patient person. My friends often say that I get anxious when facing difficult problems. My teacher has also advised me to work on improving my patience.

建議: 回答内容不够连贯，表达重复且不清晰。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明原因。

範例: Many things make me feel impatient. For instance, when I encounter difficult questions, I feel anxious because I don't know how to solve them. Also, dealing with children sometimes tests my patience.

建議: 表达不清楚且有语法错误，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达感受，并注意语法和用词准确。

範例: I feel very uncomfortable and impatient when I have to do something for a long time. My parents often tell me to calm down and be more patient.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，补充具体细节，并注意语法正确。

範例: Yes, my studies require me to be patient. For example, as a law student, I need to carefully read and understand complex materials, which demands patience.

建議: 表达不流畅且有语法错误，内容重复。建议简洁表达对比，并使用正确的语法。

範例: No, I am less patient now than when I was a child. My friends used to say I was very patient and could focus on tasks for a long time.

× No, I don't think I'm a kind of person who is very patient and all my friends say when I meet some serious questions I will feel anxious.

✓ No, I don't think I'm the kind of person who is very patient, and all my friends say when I meet some serious questions I feel anxious.

“a kind of person”前应使用定冠词“the”，表示特指某一类人。

× No, I don't think I'm a kind of person who is very patient and all my friends say when I meet some serious questions I will feel anxious.

✓ No, I don't think I'm the kind of person who is very patient, and all my friends say that when I meet some serious questions, I feel anxious.

连接词“and”连接两个句子时，第二句缺少连词“that”使句子更完整。

× So it turns out my teacher told me to improve my patience.

✓ So it turns out that my teacher told me to improve my patience.

“it turns out”后面应加连词“that”引导宾语从句。

× A lot of things will make me feel impatient.

✓ A lot of things make me feel impatient.

“A lot of things”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”。

× For example, if I meet some very difficult questions, I will feel anxious and don't know how to do how to handle it that it turns out I will feel impatient and when I meet children.

✓ For example, if I meet some very difficult questions, I feel anxious and don't know how to handle them; as a result, I feel impatient, especially when I meet children.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和标点，导致表达不清，应拆分并调整句子结构。

× I will feel anxious and don't know how to do how to handle it that it turns out I will feel impatient and when I meet children.

✓ I feel anxious and don't know how to handle it; as a result, I feel impatient, especially when I meet children.

“how to do how to handle it”重复且不正确，应简化为“how to handle it”。

× So I turned to impaired.

✓ So I turned to being impatient.

“impaired”意思是“受损的”，与语境不符，应使用“impatient”表示“不耐烦”。

× Implied with my parents and my parents always told me you must come down and improve your patient.

✓ I talked with my parents, and my parents always told me you must calm down and improve your patience.

“Implied with”错误，应为“talked with”；“come down”应为“calm down”；“patient”应为名词“patience”。

× you must come down and improve your patient.

✓ You must calm down and improve your patience.

“come down”用法错误，应为“calm down”；“patient”应为名词“patience”。

× although I'm not work, I'm a student and my start is also require me to be patient for example.

✓ Although I don't work, I'm a student and my studies also require me to be patient, for example.

“I'm not work”应为“I don't work”；“my start”应为“my studies”；“require”应与主语一致。

× my start is also require me to be patient for example.

✓ My studies also require me to be patient, for example.

“studies”复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“require”。

× I am a student starting in law school and I must have.

✓ I am a student studying in law school, and I must be patient.

句子不完整，“starting in law school”应为“studying in law school”；“I must have”缺少宾语。

× No, I'm less patient now than when I was a child.

✓ No, I'm less patient now than I was when I was a child.

比较结构中应完整表达“than I was when I was a child”。

× When I was child on my friends say AM. A girl who with a lot of patience and when I was a child I can do some borrow things for long time.

✓ When I was a child, my friends said I was a girl with a lot of patience, and when I was a child, I could do some boring things for a long time.

“on my friends say AM”语法错误，应为“my friends said I was”；“borrow things”应为“boring things”；时态和冠词使用错误。