耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和发音错误较多，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数，避免重复和断断续续的表达。

範例: No, I am not a patient person. For example, if a task takes a long time, I feel frustrated and find it hard to concentrate.

建議: 回答内容不完整且含糊，缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体原因或例子。

範例: I feel impatient when tasks take a long time because I prefer to finish things quickly. For example, waiting in long lines makes me anxious.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，影响理解。建议使用完整句子，明确表达感受，并说明原因和应对方法。

範例: I feel terrible when I have to do something for a long time because it's hard for me to concentrate. Therefore, I need to take breaks to rest myself.

建議: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，难以理解。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，说明工作中需要耐心的具体方面。

範例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I need to focus and work for long periods without getting distracted.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法和表达错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达对比，并避免重复和不连贯的词语。

範例: Of course, I am more patient now than when I was a child. In the past, I couldn't wait even two minutes for a webpage to load.

× if a tasks takes, if a task takes a.

✓ if a task takes a

这里的错误是复数形式tasks与单数冠词a搭配，应该使用单数形式task。

× I will felt.

✓ I will feel.

这里时态错误，will后面应该接动词原形feel，而不是过去式felt。

× Utah. Hard to be it, hard to concentrate.

✓ It's hard to be patient, hard to concentrate.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且表达不完整，需补充完整句子使其通顺。

× Maybe some tasks? That takes a long time.

✓ Maybe some tasks that take a long time.

tasks是复数，谓语动词也应使用复数形式take。

× Be 'cause I'm not a very patient person.

✓ Because I'm not a very patient person.

缩写形式错误，应使用完整的because。

× I will feel. Terrible when I have to do something for a long time, you 'cause it's hard for me to concentrate for long time.

✓ I feel terrible when I have to do something for a long time, because it's hard for me to concentrate for a long time.

时态不一致，will feel改为一般现在时feel；you 'cause应为because；缺少冠词a。

× I need to really with rest myself and. Two Samsung.

✓ I need to really rest myself and take a break.

表达不清，可能是口误或拼写错误，需改为正确表达。

× my drover is study starting is a. Starting this, be too focused.

✓ My job requires me to be patient and stay focused for a long time.

句子结构混乱，需重组句子并使用正确的单复数形式。

× I'm more patient now than when I was a child.

✓ I'm more patient now than I was when I was a child.

比较结构中缺少主语，需补充完整。

× In the past I only can't wait for. Even 2 minutes to not file on the Internet, Internet below I can.

✓ In the past, I couldn't wait even 2 minutes for a webpage to load on the Internet.

表达不清，时态错误，介词使用错误，需调整句子结构使其通顺。