耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to about 3-4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually stay calm even in difficult situations. Unlike many people who get angry quickly, I prefer to think carefully about how to solve problems without getting stressed.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. Also, avoid using incorrect or unclear words like 'Dennis' and 'uncomfort, able'.

範例: Certain things make me feel impatient, but I try not to show it because I believe it can make others feel uncomfortable. Therefore, I always prefer to stay calm and composed.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: I usually feel bored when I have to do the same task for a long time because I enjoy exploring new and interesting things. Repeating similar activities every day can make me feel lazy and unmotivated.

建議: Your answer contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid awkward expressions like 'to patience is one of the main thing' and 'for the impulse to the employee'.

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. Employers often look for patient employees because impatience can create a negative work environment, while patience helps maintain a positive atmosphere.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct verb tenses, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, avoid asking questions back to the examiner in this part.

範例: To be honest, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get aggressive easily, especially when people didn't listen to me. However, now I stay calm even in such situations.

× Whenever I face a new problem I started, I started thinking how to solve it not easily get a stressed.

✓ Whenever I face a new problem, I start thinking about how to solve it and do not easily get stressed.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'face' with past tense 'started'. Consistency in tense is required. Also, 'get a stressed' is incorrect; it should be 'get stressed'. The verb 'start' should be in present tense to match 'face'.

× Dennis certain things that makes me impatience, but I never shows my impatience or my aggressiveness in front of anyone because that makes other people unconfident, uncomfort, able.

✓ There are certain things that make me impatient, but I never show my impatience or aggressiveness in front of anyone because that makes other people feel unconfident and uncomfortable.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun 'Dennis' which seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'There are'. 'Makes me impatience' is incorrect; it should be 'make me impatient' to agree with plural subject. 'Shows' should be 'show' to agree with 'I'. Also, 'uncomfort, able' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'uncomfortable'.

× Moreover, I always prefer to stay calm.

✓ Moreover, I always prefer to stay calm.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain singular/plural issues.

× For doing something from long time makes me bored an I am that kind of person who always love to do interesting things and exploring things.

✓ Doing something for a long time makes me bored and I am the kind of person who always loves to do interesting things and explore things.

The phrase 'For doing something from long time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' and the article 'a' is needed before 'long time'. 'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with singular subject 'I am the kind of person'. 'Exploring' should be parallel with 'do', so 'explore' is correct.

× Doing the similar things every day or working on the particular thing for long term is makes me lazy.

✓ Doing similar things every day or working on a particular thing for a long term makes me lazy.

'The similar things' should be 'similar things' without 'the'. 'Is makes' is incorrect; it should be 'makes'. 'Particular thing' needs an article 'a'. 'For long term' should be 'for a long term'.

× Yes, not only my job even other jobs to patience is one of the main thing that firstly recruiter asked for the impulse to the employee.

✓ Yes, not only my job but other jobs as well require patience; it is one of the main things that recruiters first ask for in an employee.

The sentence has incorrect modal verb and structure. 'To patience' is incorrect; 'require patience' is correct. 'Firstly recruiter asked for the impulse to the employee' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'recruiters first ask for patience in an employee'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× If impatience worker is working in a company that makes environment negative whereas if a person is patient environment is positive.

✓ If an impatient worker is working in a company, it makes the environment negative, whereas if a person is patient, the environment is positive.

'Impatience worker' should be 'impatient worker'. The sentence lacks articles 'an' and 'the'. The conjunction 'whereas' is used correctly but commas are needed for clarity. The sentence structure is improved for readability.

× To be very honest, yes, I am more patient now as a compared to my child.

✓ To be very honest, yes, I am more patient now compared to when I was a child.

'As a compared to my child' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'compared to when I was a child' to compare the speaker's current patience with their childhood.

× Up since I was a child, I feel more aggressive.

✓ Since I was a child, I felt more aggressive.

'Up since' is incorrect; 'Since' is sufficient. The tense should be past 'felt' to indicate a state in the past, not present 'feel'.

× Aggressive while playing or whenever anybody is not listen to me.

✓ I was aggressive while playing or whenever anybody did not listen to me.

The sentence lacks a subject 'I' and uses incorrect verb form 'is not listen'; it should be 'did not listen' to match past tense. The sentence is incomplete and needs correction for clarity.

× I've become easily aggressive.

✓ I used to become easily aggressive.

The present perfect 'I've become' suggests a recent change, but the context implies a past habitual action. 'Used to become' better expresses past repeated behaviour.

× But nowadays I feel come if somebody is not listening to me.

✓ But nowadays I feel calm if somebody is not listening to me.

'Feel come' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'calm'. The sentence needs this correction to convey the intended meaning.