耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'I I always do anything with the relaxing mode,' you could say 'I always approach tasks calmly and without stress.'

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always approach tasks calmly and without stress. For instance, when I study or work, I remain relaxed and focused, which helps me manage my time effectively.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for my wife to get ready, especially after she showers and applies makeup. She often takes a long time, which makes me anxious because we have to meet someone on a special day.

建議: Your answer conveys your feelings well but is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same words. Also, try to provide more specific examples.

範例: To be honest, I feel overwhelmed and frustrated when I have to do something for a long time. For example, waiting for someone who is late makes me feel impatient and annoyed because it wastes my time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks smooth flow. Try to combine your sentences using linking words and correct grammar. Also, provide more detailed examples to enrich your answer.

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I drive a cab and meet people with different personalities. Therefore, I have to remain calm and humble, whether I am dealing with young people or older passengers.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to express your thoughts more clearly and concisely.

範例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to want to do everything quickly. However, I have learned the importance of time and hard work, which has helped me become more patient.

× I I always do anything with the relaxing mode.

✓ I always do everything in a relaxed mode.

The phrase 'with the relaxing mode' is incorrect because 'relaxing' is a present participle used improperly here. The correct adjective form is 'relaxed' to describe the mode or state. Also, 'anything' should be 'everything' to express all actions.

× Moreover, I do not to put myself in a stress or want to do any task.

✓ Moreover, I do not put myself under stress or want to do any task.

The phrase 'put myself in a stress' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'under' when referring to stress. Also, 'do not to put' is incorrect; it should be 'do not put' without 'to'.

× She take too long because we have to go to to meet someone on that special day.

✓ She takes too long because we have to go to meet someone on that special day.

The verb 'take' must agree with the third person singular subject 'She', so it should be 'takes'. Also, the repeated 'to' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× I feel really frustrated and angry on someone who makes me wait.

✓ I feel really frustrated and angry at someone who makes me wait.

The correct preposition to express anger directed towards a person is 'at', not 'on'.

× Yes, my job. Requires me to be patient, be 'cause I drive cab and I meet all different kinds of personalities.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I drive a cab and meet all different kinds of personalities.

The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period after 'job'. 'Be 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'. Also, 'drive cab' needs an article 'a' before 'cab'.

× I have to see youngster. Oh, old people.

✓ I have to see youngsters and old people.

The singular 'youngster' should be plural 'youngsters' to match 'old people'. Also, the sentence fragments should be combined for clarity.

× As far as I remember in my childhood, uh, I'm not as much as patient.

✓ As far as I remember from my childhood, I was not as patient.

The sentence refers to past time, so the verb should be in past tense 'was' instead of 'am'. Also, 'as much as patient' is incorrect; it should be 'as patient'.

× Nowadays I comes to know about the importance of time and importance of work.

✓ Nowadays I come to know about the importance of time and work.

The verb 'comes' does not agree with the first person singular subject 'I'; it should be 'come'. Also, 'importance of work' is sufficient without repeating 'importance'.