耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then giving specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and check sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually stay calm in most situations. However, when things go beyond my limits, I tend to lose patience and express my feelings. Overall, I try to maintain patience to keep a peaceful environment.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about situations that make you impatient. Also, avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for better understanding.

範例: I feel impatient when people reject my correct opinions and insist that they are right. Additionally, loud noises and aggressive behaviour around me make me uncomfortable, as I prefer quiet environments.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your feelings clearly. Also, avoid repetition and improve vocabulary to express your ideas better.

範例: I usually feel tired and bored when I have to do the same task for a long time. Therefore, I prefer to take breaks or switch to different activities because it's hard to concentrate on one thing continuously.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: As an engineering student, I need to be very patient because coding involves many errors. Debugging and fixing these errors can be challenging, so patience is essential in this field.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons logically.

範例: No, I am less patient now compared to when I was a child. This is because of the stress and challenges I face during my teenage and adult years, which have made me more impatient.

× I am person who tolerate most of the things that happen around me.

✓ I am a person who tolerates most of the things that happen around me.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'person' which is singular and countable. Also, the verb 'tolerate' should be in third person singular form 'tolerates' to agree with the singular subject 'person'.

× I think I am a per patient person.

✓ I think I am a very patient person.

The word 'per' is incorrect here; the correct adverb to intensify 'patient' is 'very'.

× Whenever something exceeds my limit, I will break the patience and ask whatever come in my mind.

✓ Whenever something exceeds my limit, I will lose my patience and say whatever comes to my mind.

The phrase 'break the patience' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'lose my patience'. Also, 'ask whatever come in my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'say whatever comes to my mind' with 'comes' agreeing with singular 'whatever' and 'to' as the correct preposition.

× Something that make me feel impatient is when never someone is rejecting the opinion in which I'm correct but they're proving that they are correct.

✓ Something that makes me feel impatient is when someone rejects the opinion in which I'm correct but they are proving that they are correct.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'Something'. 'Never someone' is incorrect and should be 'someone'. 'Rejecting' should be 'rejects' to match the tense and subject. 'They're' is acceptable but better to use 'they are' for clarity.

× Or some when someone make loud noises or just show their aggression towards me it feel it makes me really impatient and I I really don't like noisy environment.

✓ Or sometimes when someone makes loud noises or just shows their aggression towards me, it makes me really impatient and I really don't like noisy environments.

'Some when' should be 'sometimes'. Verbs 'make' and 'show' should be 'makes' and 'shows' to agree with singular 'someone'. 'It feel it makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes'. 'Noisy environment' should be plural 'noisy environments' to generalize the dislike.

× I will feel really tired and boring.

✓ I will feel really tired and bored.

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes the feeling of the person. Here, the student is describing their own feeling, so 'bored' is correct.

× it makes me really boring and I my mind will be shifted to somewhere else.

✓ it makes me really bored and my mind will shift somewhere else.

Same as above, 'boring' should be 'bored' to describe the feeling. 'I my mind' is incorrect; 'my mind' is sufficient. 'Will be shifted' is passive and awkward; active voice 'will shift' is better. 'To somewhere else' should be 'somewhere else'.

× So I would like to do something which. Something different after sometimes becaused.

✓ So I would like to do something different after some time because we cannot keep concentrating on a particular thing for a long time.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Which. Something different after sometimes becaused.' is incomplete and contains spelling errors. It should be combined and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× We cannot keep concentrate on a particular thing for a long time.

✓ We cannot keep concentrating on a particular thing for a long time.

The verb 'concentrate' should be in the gerund form 'concentrating' after 'keep'.

× engineering field require more patient students because there will be Lord of errors in the chords we execute in our daily life.

✓ The engineering field requires more patient students because there will be lots of errors in the codes we execute in our daily life.

'Engineering field' is singular and needs 'The' and the verb 'require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject. 'Lord' is a misspelling of 'lots'. 'Chords' should be 'codes' in this context.

× I think engineering is most probably based on code, so the execution of course is really difficult and debugging and fixing is also really very hard.

✓ I think engineering is probably based on code, so the execution of code is really difficult and debugging and fixing are also very hard.

'Most probably' is better as 'probably'. 'Execution of course' is incorrect; it should be 'execution of code'. 'Debugging and fixing is' should be 'debugging and fixing are' because the subject is plural.

× So I think patience is really involved.

✓ So I think patience is really important.

'Patience is really involved' is awkward and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that patience is important or necessary.

× No, I think my patience has decreased.

✓ No, I think my patience has decreased.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I became more impatient currently because I did my stress, my NCT, an something that I'm going through in my life.

✓ I have become more impatient recently because of my stress, my NCT, and something that I'm going through in my life.

'Became' is past tense but 'currently' indicates present; 'have become' is present perfect to show recent change. 'I did my stress' is incorrect; 'because of my stress' is correct. 'An something' should be 'and something'.

× I think I became more impatient may be due to some changes that occur during my adult, my teenagers.

✓ I think I have become more impatient maybe due to some changes that occurred during my adulthood and teenage years.

'May be' should be 'maybe'. 'Occur' should be past tense 'occurred' to match 'became'. 'During my adult, my teenagers' is incorrect; correct phrases are 'during my adulthood and teenage years'.

× That's why I become more impatient.

✓ That's why I have become more impatient.

To indicate a change up to the present, present perfect 'have become' is appropriate instead of simple present 'become'.