耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang alami dan efektif dengan maksimal 5 kalimat.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually stay calm in difficult situations. For example, when I face delays, I try to remain composed and not get upset.

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi perhatikan tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Misalnya, gunakan 'because' atau 'so' untuk menghubungkan ide.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially for trains or buses, because it wastes my time. Also, I get impatient when people are late for appointments since it shows a lack of respect for others' time. Therefore, waiting and delays make me feel frustrated and anxious.

建議: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta gunakan kosakata yang tepat dan relevan.

範例: I feel extremely bored and cranky when I have to do something for a long time because I don't like waiting. It feels very annoying.

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung ide yang baik, tetapi ada kesalahan tata bahasa dan kata yang tidak tepat. Perbaiki penggunaan kata sifat dan kata kerja, serta buat kalimat lebih koheren dengan kata penghubung.

範例: Yes, of course. My job is in customer service, so I need to be very patient when dealing with different customers. Sometimes customers can be upset or confused, so I have to stay calm and understanding to help solve their problems effectively.

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah baik dan cukup lengkap. Namun, perhatikan penggunaan kata benda dan kata sifat seperti 'patience' dan 'patient'. Gunakan kata yang tepat sesuai konteks.

範例: Yes, I believe I'm much more patient now than when I was a child because my job requires me to stay calm and handle stressful situations regularly. For example, dealing with difficult customers has taught me to be more understanding and patient. As a result, this experience has significantly improved my ability to wait calmly and manage challenging circumstances effectively.

× Yes, I think. I such a patient person because I always. Being calm an.

✓ Yes, I think I am such a patient person because I am always calm.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms. 'I such a patient person' is missing the verb 'am'. 'I always. Being calm an.' is incomplete and incorrectly structured. The corrected sentence combines the fragments into a complete sentence with correct verb usage and structure.

× I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time especially when waiting for trains or buses because it waste my time.

✓ I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially when waiting for trains or buses because it wastes my time.

The verb 'waste' should be in the third person singular form 'wastes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, a comma is added after 'time' for clarity.

× Also I get impatient when people are late for appointment since it show a lack of respect for others time.

✓ Also, I get impatient when people are late for appointments since it shows a lack of respect for others' time.

The verb 'show' should be 'shows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Appointment' should be plural 'appointments' to match the context. Also, possessive apostrophe is needed in 'others' to indicate possession.

× I can get extremely bored, Ann. Cranky, Cranky is Lee be 'cause I don't. Like to wait for long time. An it feels like annoying.

✓ I can get extremely bored and cranky because I don't like to wait for a long time. It feels annoying.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear words ('Ann', 'Lee be'). The corrected sentence combines ideas into coherent sentences with proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× My job is in customer service so I need to be very patience when dealing with different customers.

✓ My job is in customer service, so I need to be very patient when dealing with different customers.

'Patience' is a noun, but the adjective 'patient' is needed here to describe the speaker. Also, a comma is added before 'so' for correct sentence structure.

× Sometimes customer can be upset or confused so I'm I have to stay in home and understanding helps solve their problem affectively.

✓ Sometimes customers can be upset or confused, so I have to stay calm and understanding helps solve their problems effectively.

The sentence has several errors: 'customer' should be plural 'customers'; 'I'm I have to stay in home' is incorrect and changed to 'I have to stay calm'; 'affectively' is a misspelling of 'effectively'; 'problem' should be plural 'problems'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes, I believe I'm much more patient now than when I was a child because my job required me to stay calm and handle stressful situation regularly.

✓ Yes, I believe I'm much more patient now than when I was a child because my job requires me to stay calm and handle stressful situations regularly.

The verb 'required' is changed to 'requires' to match the present tense context. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the context.

× For example, I often have to deal with difficult customers, which has taught me to be more understanding and patience.

✓ For example, I often have to deal with difficult customers, which has taught me to be more understanding and patient.

'Patience' is a noun, but the adjective 'patient' is needed here to parallel 'understanding'.

× As a result, this experience has significantly improved my ability to wait calmly and manage challenging circumstance effectively.

✓ As a result, this experience has significantly improved my ability to wait calmly and manage challenging circumstances effectively.

'Circumstance' should be plural 'circumstances' to match the context.