耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say "Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I practice meditation regularly, which helps me stay calm and patient with others."

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I practice meditation regularly, which helps me stay calm and patient with others.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. For example, "I feel impatient when I have to wait for others who take a long time, which makes me anxious and stressed."

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for others who take a long time, which makes me anxious and stressed.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. For example, "I find doing something for a long time challenging because I am not used to it, so it can be tiring and stressful."

範例: I find doing something for a long time challenging because I am not used to it, so it can be tiring and stressful.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing. Try to answer directly and clearly with proper sentence structure. For example, "As a student, I need to be patient with my studies to understand and learn important knowledge."

範例: As a student, I need to be patient with my studies to understand and learn important knowledge.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs better grammar and coherence. Use linking words and correct tenses. For example, "Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be anxious and angry. Now, I meditate daily which helps me stay calm and relaxed."

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be anxious and angry. Now, I meditate daily which helps me stay calm and relaxed.

× Yes, I can think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used here to express opinion. The correct expression is 'I think so' without 'can'.

× because as I do meditation in my own my regular basis and it helps me to provide mood, relaxation and patience toward other individuals.

✓ because I meditate regularly on my own and it helps me to provide a good mood, relaxation, and patience towards other individuals.

The phrase 'as I do meditation in my own my regular basis' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on my own' and 'regular basis' should be preceded by 'regularly'. Also, 'provide mood' is incorrect; it should be 'provide a good mood'.

× Well sometimes when I usually wait for another person than me he make he usually consume so much time of me then I definitely become impatient and usually gain so much in anxiety and stress in that period of time.

✓ Well, sometimes when I usually wait for another person, he usually takes so much of my time that I definitely become impatient and usually experience a lot of anxiety and stress during that period.

The pronouns and verb forms are incorrect. 'He make he usually consume' should be 'he usually takes'. Also, 'consume so much time of me' is incorrect; it should be 'takes so much of my time'. 'Gain so much in anxiety and stress' is incorrect; 'experience a lot of anxiety and stress' is appropriate.

× Well doing something for a long time is awesome. Sometime complicated for me because as I do not usually do so many work for a long time, so it can be very complicated as well as address full activity for me.

✓ Well, doing something for a long time is awesome. Sometimes it is complicated for me because I do not usually do so much work for a long time, so it can be very complicated as well as a stressful activity for me.

'Sometime complicated' should be 'Sometimes it is complicated'. 'So many work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable, so 'so much work' is correct. 'Address full activity' is unclear and likely meant to be 'stressful activity'.

× Currently I'm a student as a person who I hired further education, so in my in my kind I usually focus on my studies as well as it is important to be patient about my studies to gain some essential knowledge.

✓ Currently, I'm a student pursuing further education, so I usually focus on my studies and it is important to be patient with my studies to gain essential knowledge.

The phrase 'as a person who I hired further education' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'pursuing further education'. 'In my in my kind' is incorrect and removed. 'Be patient about my studies' should be 'be patient with my studies'.

× Uh, definitely yes, I think so. When I was sad, I'm usually impatient person because on that period of time I usually very anxious and. Angry person but now I'm on today's time I as do meditation for my daily basis so I will help to make myself relax and calm.

✓ Uh, definitely yes, I think so. When I was young, I was usually an impatient person because during that period I was very anxious and angry, but now I meditate daily which helps me to relax and stay calm.

'When I was sad' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was young' to refer to childhood. 'I'm usually impatient person' should be 'I was usually an impatient person' to match past tense. 'On that period of time' should be 'during that period'. 'I as do meditation for my daily basis' is incorrect; it should be 'I meditate daily'. 'I will help to make myself relax and calm' should be 'which helps me to relax and stay calm'.