耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "I feel like I don't have much patience" and "it is my weakness" which convey similar ideas. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I consider myself quite impulsive and lacking patience. However, I am working on improving this by learning strategies to become more patient.

建議: Your answer addresses the question well and includes examples, but some sentences are unclear or grammatically incorrect, such as "delete meeting" and "work finish work online." Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for important things, like a delayed meeting or a slow Internet connection. For instance, when I'm working online and the connection keeps dropping, it disrupts my focus and makes me anxious.

建議: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, you could add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and vary your vocabulary slightly.

範例: I usually feel quite tired and sometimes bored when I have to do something for a long time. For example, if I study or work continuously without breaks, my concentration drops, and consequently, I start to lose motivation.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I get. Stressed" and "the environment sometimes get really busy there." Try to use linking words and correct sentence structures to improve clarity and fluency.

範例: Yes, my job definitely requires a great deal of patience. For example, I work in the food industry where it can get very busy, so I have to work under pressure and stay patient to manage stress effectively.

建議: Your answer attempts to compare past and present patience, but it is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as "rather when I was a child" and "demand format to my." Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition of "used to."

範例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. For example, as a kid, I would get impatient if I didn't get the toys I wanted immediately.

× I am trying to improve myself and getting better with learning how I could be a more patient person.

✓ I am trying to improve myself and get better at learning how I can be a more patient person.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes 'am trying' with 'getting' without a proper auxiliary verb, causing a grammatical inconsistency. The correct form is to use parallel verb forms: 'am trying' and 'get'. Also, 'with learning' should be 'at learning' to use the correct preposition with 'get better'. Additionally, 'could' is changed to 'can' to express present ability.

× I feel impatient when I have to wait for something important such as the delete meeting or a slow Internet connection.

✓ I feel impatient when I have to wait for something important such as the delayed meeting or a slow Internet connection.

The word 'delete' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'delayed' to describe a meeting that is late. This is a vocabulary error rather than a preposition error, but it affects sentence clarity.

× For example, when I am trying to work finish work online and the connection keeps dropping.

✓ For example, when I am trying to finish work online and the connection keeps dropping.

The phrase 'work finish work' is redundant and incorrect. The correct structure is 'trying to finish work'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, as I work in the food industry and the environment sometimes get really busy there, I have to work under a lot of pressure and I get.

✓ For example, as I work in the food industry and the environment sometimes gets really busy there, I have to work under a lot of pressure and I get stressed.

The subject 'environment' is singular and requires the singular verb 'gets' instead of 'get'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I get.' which is incomplete; adding 'stressed' completes the thought.

× Yes, certainly I have realized as I have grown up I have more patience rather when I was a child.

✓ Yes, certainly I have realized that as I have grown up, I have more patience than when I was a child.

The original sentence lacks the conjunction 'that' to introduce the clause and uses 'rather' incorrectly instead of 'than' for comparison. Adding 'that' and replacing 'rather' with 'than' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× For example, when I used to be a kid, I used to be very particular if I want something and I used to get impatient when I don't get any toy which I demand format to my.

✓ For example, when I was a kid, I used to be very particular if I wanted something and I used to get impatient when I didn't get any toy that I demanded from my parents.

The sentence has tense inconsistency; 'used to be' should be followed by past tense verbs 'wanted' and 'didn't get'. The phrase 'which I demand format to my' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'that I demanded from my parents' for clarity and grammatical correctness.