耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: Yes, I consider myself quite patient with others because I believe it helps create a respectful environment. However, I tend to be less patient with myself when I don't meet my own expectations.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to support your points.

範例: I usually feel impatient with myself, especially when I perform poorly in important tasks. For example, if I don't achieve quick progress, I get frustrated because I set high standards and expect immediate results.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your sentences. Also, avoid filler words like 'you know' to sound more natural.

範例: It depends on my interest in the task. If I am passionate about it, I tend to stay dedicated and persevere through difficulties. However, if I'm not interested, I find it harder to maintain patience.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to respond directly, use correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with linking words.

範例: Although I am a student and don't have a job yet, I believe that every job requires patience. This includes dedication and perseverance when facing challenges, which are essential in any industry.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to give a clear, complete response with correct grammar and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically.

範例: I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have better control over my emotions. As a child, I often lost my temper, especially with my parents. However, now I am more demanding of myself, which sometimes makes me less patient.

× Are you she behave patiently to others because I think it is you know a great way or today it will let others feel better or respected.

✓ Do you behave patiently towards others because I think it is, you know, a great way and it lets others feel better or respected.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Are you she behave' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'Do you behave' to ask about habitual actions. Also, 'to others' should be 'towards others' for correct preposition use. The sentence structure is corrected to make it clear and grammatically correct.

× However, to myself, I usually dim and higher then.

✓ However, towards myself, I am usually more critical and demanding.

The phrase 'dim and higher then' is unclear and incorrect. It seems the student intended to express being harsh or demanding towards themselves. 'Towards myself' is a better prepositional phrase, and 'more critical and demanding' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× Well, it is usually myself that makes me feel impatient, for instance when I. Performed at the in some important task or I'm not satisfied with my personal performance.

✓ Well, it is usually myself that makes me feel impatient, for instance when I performed some important task or I'm not satisfied with my personal performance.

The original sentence has a misplaced period and an unnecessary preposition 'at the'. Removing the period and 'at the' corrects the sentence. 'Performed some important task' is the correct past tense usage here.

× Well, actually it depends on whether I have the passion. About doing these things.

✓ Well, actually it depends on whether I have the passion for doing these things.

The preposition 'About' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express interest or enthusiasm is 'for'. Also, the period after 'passion' is incorrect; it should be part of the same sentence.

× So if I'm really, you know, into this field or area, I think I will probably be dedicated to do it and persevere when I'm facing some difficulties encountered when I'm not too interested in it.

✓ So if I'm really, you know, into this field or area, I think I will probably be dedicated to doing it and persevere when I'm facing some difficulties, but not when I'm not too interested in it.

The phrase 'dedicated to do it' is incorrect; 'dedicated to doing it' is the correct form because 'dedicated to' is followed by a gerund. The sentence was also run-on and unclear; adding 'but not' clarifies the contrast.

× Well honestly I'm serious student so I don't actually have a job but. I have thought about it before and I actually consider every job requires a strong ability of patients.

✓ Well honestly, I'm a serious student so I don't actually have a job, but I have thought about it before and I actually consider every job requires a strong ability of patience.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'serious student'. The period after 'but' is incorrect and should be a comma. Also, 'patients' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'patience'.

× And patients can also refers to the dedication and perseverance when facing difficulties, which is important in any industry.

✓ And patience can also refer to dedication and perseverance when facing difficulties, which is important in any industry.

'Patients' is incorrect; it should be 'patience'. Also, 'can also refers' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'can also refer'.

× Well, it's pretty tricky to evaluate because I seem to be more patient with that is compared to myself when I was a child as I cannot as I couldn't really control my emotions when I was a child, so I often locked my Tempest, especially to my parents.

✓ Well, it's pretty tricky to evaluate because I seem to be more patient with others compared to myself when I was a child, as I couldn't really control my emotions then, so I often lost my temper, especially with my parents.

The phrase 'more patient with that is' is incorrect; it should be 'more patient with others'. 'Locked my Tempest' is a misuse; the correct phrase is 'lost my temper'. Also, 'especially to my parents' should be 'especially with my parents'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× However, now I'm more you're demanding of myself, which means that when I.

✓ However, now I'm more demanding of myself, which means that when I...

The phrase 'you're demanding' is incorrect; it should be 'more demanding'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected up to the point given.