耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇表达耐心的含义。

範例: Yes, I am a patient person. When I face difficult situations, I try many times without giving up. Even if I make mistakes, I keep trying until I get better results.

建議: 回答中表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议用简单明了的句子描述让你感到不耐烦的具体情境，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

範例: I feel impatient when I try to explain something but people do not listen carefully. Then they ask me the same questions again, which makes me frustrated.

建議: 回答中有拼写错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确的词汇和句式，清楚表达长时间做事时的感受。

範例: I feel very tired when I have to do something for a long time. My patience decreases and I start to feel bored.

建議: 回答内容较好，但语法和用词需改进。建议注意冠词使用和句子连贯性，表达更自然。

範例: Yes, my job is complicated. I cannot get the right answer the first time, so I have to keep improving the process until it is accurate.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子，正确使用时态和单复数，清楚表达耐心随年龄增长而增加的观点。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Life has many challenges, and facing them has helped me become more patient.

× Yes, I'm definitely a person who possess about impatience.

✓ Yes, I'm definitely a person who possesses impatience.

动词与主语单复数不一致。主语是单数person，动词应加s变为possesses。'possess about impatience'表达不准确，改为'possesses impatience'更自然。

× As for me, while I was trapped in a terrible situation, I would give message of hundreds of time to trail and error.

✓ As for me, while I was trapped in a terrible situation, I would send messages hundreds of times to trial and error.

时态使用不当，'would give message'表达不清且不符合语境，改为'would send messages'更合适。'trail and error'应为'trial and error'。

× As for me, while I was trapped in a terrible situation, I would give message of hundreds of time to trail and error.

✓ As for me, while I was trapped in a terrible situation, I would send messages hundreds of times to trial and error.

'message'应为复数'messages'，'time'应为复数'times'，表示多次。

× Although I had a missed the mistakes over and over again, I would never give up or depressed better outcomes.

✓ Although I had missed the mistakes over and over again, I would never give up or be depressed about better outcomes.

'had a missed'错误，正确为'had missed'。'depressed'应为形容词，前面缺少动词，改为'be depressed'。

× Although I had a missed the mistakes over and over again, I would never give up or depressed better outcomes.

✓ Although I had missed the mistakes over and over again, I would never give up or be depressed about better outcomes.

'depressed better outcomes'缺少介词，正确表达应为'depressed about better outcomes'。

× It must be a circumstance that I'm trying to make an effort to explain the definition of the word.

✓ It must be a circumstance where I'm trying to make an effort to explain the definition of the word.

'that'指代不准确，改为'where'更符合语境。

× But they don't like ever ties on it while I'm talking.

✓ But they don't like any interruptions while I'm talking.

'ever ties'用词错误，应为'any interruptions'表示任何打断。

× And after that they come to ask me what I. Have told before.

✓ And after that, they come to ask me what I have told them before.

句子结构混乱，'what I. Have told before'断句错误，且缺少宾语'them'。

× I will be very impatience and refused to answer him.

✓ I will be very impatient and refuse to answer him.

'impatience'是名词，需用形容词'impatient'。'refused'时态错误，应为现在时'refuse'。

× That must be exhausted.

✓ That must be exhausting.

'exhausted'是形容词，表示人感到疲惫，'exhausting'表示事情令人疲惫，句中应使用'exhausting'。

× I think if I'm immersed TR incident for a long time, my patients will gradually fade away and I will feel more and more bored.

✓ I think if I'm immersed in a tiring incident for a long time, my patience will gradually fade away and I will feel more and more bored.

'patients'应为'patience'，表示耐心。缺少介词'in'。

× I think if I'm immersed TR incident for a long time, my patients will gradually fade away and I will feel more and more bored.

✓ I think if I'm immersed in a tiring incident for a long time, my patience will gradually fade away and I will feel more and more bored.

'immersed'后应接介词'in'。

× Yes, my job is very complicated.

✓ Yes, my job is very complicated.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× It is impossible for me to figure out the right answer as the first time I do it, I'm supposed to modify this process over and over again in order to make a accurate answer.

✓ It is impossible for me to figure out the right answer the first time I do it; I'm supposed to modify this process over and over again in order to make an accurate answer.

'as the first time'应改为'the first time'。'a accurate'错误，'accurate'以元音音素开头，冠词应为'an'。

× It is impossible for me to figure out the right answer as the first time I do it, I'm supposed to modify this process over and over again in order to make a accurate answer.

✓ It is impossible for me to figure out the right answer the first time I do it; I'm supposed to modify this process over and over again in order to make an accurate answer.

冠词使用错误，'a accurate'应为'an accurate'。

× Yes, I think my patients is increasing with the growth of my age because there are so many troubles and complicated difficulties happened in my life which present our obstacle on my way to success.

✓ Yes, I think my patience is increasing with the growth of my age because there are so many troubles and complicated difficulties happening in my life which present obstacles on my way to success.

'patients'应为'patience'。'obstacle'应为复数'obstacles'。

× Yes, I think my patients is increasing with the growth of my age because there are so many troubles and complicated difficulties happened in my life which present our obstacle on my way to success.

✓ Yes, I think my patience is increasing with the growth of my age because there are so many troubles and complicated difficulties happening in my life which present obstacles on my way to success.

'happened'应改为现在分词'happening'，表示正在发生的情况。

× Yes, I think my patients is increasing with the growth of my age because there are so many troubles and complicated difficulties happened in my life which present our obstacle on my way to success.

✓ Yes, I think my patience is increasing with the growth of my age because there are so many troubles and complicated difficulties happening in my life which present obstacles on my way to success.

'our obstacle'应为'my obstacles'，指代不一致。

× But it also play a vital role in forcing me to foster greater patience.

✓ But it also plays a vital role in forcing me to foster greater patience.

主语'it'为单数，动词应加s，改为'plays'。