耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy tránh lặp lại và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt cảm xúc của bạn.

範例: I think my patience depends on the situation. Usually, I am very calm, but I feel terrible when someone is late for a date with me.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Đồng thời, dùng từ vựng chính xác để diễn tả cảm xúc của bạn.

範例: Waiting in line makes me feel impatient because I think it wastes my time and makes me annoyed.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh nói lắp và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.

範例: I feel angry and tired when I have to do something for a long time, especially if it is not my job.

建議: Bạn nên nói câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý tưởng hợp lý. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả công việc và yêu cầu tính kiên nhẫn.

範例: I am a teacher, and my job requires me to be patient because my students can be very naughty, so I always have to teach them calmly.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng, tránh nói lắp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng mạch lạc với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ.

範例: Absolutely, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to stay calm in different situations.

× Well I think it rely on situation what I Fe.

✓ Well I think it relies on the situation what I feel.

The verb 'rely' should be in third person singular present tense 'relies' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'Fe' seems to be a misspelling of 'feel'.

× normally I very calm down, but when someone else.

✓ Normally I am very calm, but when someone else is late,

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to form the present tense 'I am very calm'. Also, 'calm down' is a phrasal verb meaning to become calm, but here 'calm' as an adjective is appropriate.

× Someone else late. In my. In my date I feel terrible.

✓ If someone else is late on my date, I feel terrible.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It needs a conditional clause with 'if' and the verb 'is' for 'someone else'.

× I think wait in line people make I feel in pension.

✓ I think waiting in line makes me feel impatient.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Wait in line people' should be 'waiting in line'. Also, 'make I feel in pension' should be 'makes me feel impatient'.

× Because I think. Is so waste my time. An make me so annoying.

✓ Because I think it is such a waste of my time and it makes me very annoyed.

'Is so waste my time' is incorrect; it should be 'it is such a waste of my time'. 'Make me so annoying' should be 'makes me very annoyed' to correctly use the adjective.

× I I guess. Is real I. On the situation.

✓ I guess it really depends on the situation.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs a subject 'it' and verb 'depends' to form a complete sentence.

× An if the work. Not my, not my job.

✓ And if the work is not mine, not my job,

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' and the possessive pronoun 'mine' is needed to indicate ownership.

× And I just do it for a long time.

✓ and I just have to do it for a long time,

The sentence needs to connect properly with the previous clause and use 'have to' to indicate obligation.

× I will so angry and tired.

✓ I will be so angry and tired.

The verb 'be' is missing after 'will' to form the future tense 'will be'.

× I think my job required.

✓ I think my job requires

The verb 'required' is past tense; it should be present tense 'requires' to agree with 'my job'.

× I miss to be pension because.

✓ I need to be patient because

'Miss to be pension' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'need to be patient'.

× Student my student. Is so naughty.

✓ My students are so naughty.

The word order is incorrect; 'Student my student' should be 'My students'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'are'.

× And I always AM. Teach them.

✓ and I always teach them.

The verb 'am' is unnecessary here; 'I always teach them' is correct present tense.

× Because when I go to try.

✓ Because when I try,

The phrase 'go to try' is incorrect; simply 'try' is appropriate.

× I don't know Keep stay calm down an now I learn.

✓ I don't know how to keep calm down and now I have learned,

The phrase 'Keep stay calm down' is incorrect; it should be 'how to keep calm'. Also, 'learn' should be past participle 'have learned' to indicate completed action.

× Something aperion Ann.

✓ something about patience.

The phrase is unclear and seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling; 'something about patience' fits the context.

× I know I can stay calm down for everything.

✓ I know I can stay calm in every situation.

The phrase 'stay calm down' is incorrect; 'stay calm' is sufficient. Also, 'for everything' is better expressed as 'in every situation'.