耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly. Also, try to correct minor grammar issues, such as 'can't wait to see or to find anything new' which can be simplified.

範例: Honestly, I'm not a very patient person because I get excited about discovering new things. For example, I was really eager to watch the IPL match recently since it involved my favourite team.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'well' and 'um' to sound more confident. Also, be careful with word choice and repetition; for example, 'eagerness' and 'more eager' are repetitive. Clarify your ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I feel impatient mainly because of my strong desire to know outcomes quickly. Moreover, my enthusiasm for trying new things often makes me restless.

建議: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. Instead of 'I feel very boring,' say 'I feel very bored.' Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'long attacks' and 'the while recently.' Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: I usually feel bored and a bit lazy when I have to do something for a long time. Therefore, I break the task into smaller parts. For instance, while preparing for my IELTS exam recently, I divided my study schedule into manageable sections.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Instead of 'I am very less patient,' say 'I am not very patient.' Also, try to answer directly and clearly, even if you don't have a job, by relating to your studies.

範例: I don't have a job currently, but regarding my studies, I admit that I am not very patient.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'more facing now and then' and 'I was not measured enough.' Try to use clearer vocabulary and sentence structures. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific examples and linking words.

範例: To be honest, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I didn't listen to others and lacked the maturity to understand situations. However, now I can fully comprehend circumstances and respond appropriately.

× Well, I feel very boring and I kind of feel lazy.

✓ Well, I feel very bored and I kind of feel lazy.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes the feeling of the person. Since the student is describing their own feeling, 'bored' is correct here.

× So whoever did that, I simply breakdown my long attacks into small parts.

✓ So whenever I do that, I simply break down my long tasks into small parts.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Whoever' is incorrect; 'whenever' fits the context of time. 'Breakdown' is a noun; the verb form is 'break down'. 'Attacks' is likely a typo for 'tasks'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× For example, the while recently while I was preparing for my Isles exam, I used to break my study schedule.

✓ For example, recently while I was preparing for my IELTS exam, I used to break my study schedule into parts.

The phrase 'the while recently while' is redundant and incorrect; 'recently while' is appropriate. 'Isles' is likely a misspelling of 'IELTS'. Also, 'break my study schedule' is incomplete; adding 'into parts' clarifies the meaning.

× Well, I can't answer this because I don't have a job and in case of his studies I am very less patient.

✓ Well, I can't answer this because I don't have a job and in case of my studies I am not very patient.

'In case of his studies' is incorrect; it should be 'in case of my studies' to refer to the speaker. 'Very less patient' is ungrammatical; 'not very patient' is the correct expression.

× Willing to be honest, I am more facing now and then.

✓ Willing to be honest, I am more patient now than then.

'More facing' is incorrect; likely intended 'more patient'. Also, 'now and then' means 'sometimes', but the intended comparison is 'now than then' (comparing present to past). Correcting pronouns and phrases clarifies meaning.

× I used to be because when I was a child I did not listen to anyone and I was not measured enough to understand the situation.

✓ I used to be because when I was a child I did not listen to anyone and I was not mature enough to understand the situation.

'Measured' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'mature' to describe emotional or mental development. The rest of the sentence is in past tense and correct.