耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and simple sentences. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage.

範例: No, I am not a very patient person. For example, I feel stressed and anxious when I have to wait in a long queue.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many mistakes. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your feelings and reasons.

範例: Waiting with someone for a long time or standing in a queue makes me impatient because I feel distracted and exhausted.

建議: Your answer has many grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to use correct words and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

範例: I feel stressed and exhausted when I have to do a task for a long time. For example, traveling to supervise construction sites can be tiring after a long day.

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain your job and why patience is needed.

範例: Yes, definitely. I work in construction and I have to travel to different sites to supervise work, which requires a lot of patience and hard work.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many mistakes. Try to clearly compare your past and present patience levels with simple sentences and correct grammar.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I was impatient because others helped me, but now I have to do things myself, so I have learned to be more patient.

× No I'm not, not that much, but I'm not very passionate person.

✓ No, I'm not, not that much, but I'm not a very patient person.

The word 'passionate' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'patient' to describe someone who can wait calmly. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'very patient person'.

× Whenever I have to wait for some something I feel stressful, are anxious and a poor example whenever I have to.

✓ Whenever I have to wait for something, I feel stressed, anxious, and it is a poor example whenever I have to.

The phrase 'some something' is incorrect; it should be 'something'. 'Stressful' is an adjective describing a situation, but here the speaker feels 'stressed' (an emotion). 'Are anxious' is incorrect; it should be 'anxious'. The sentence structure is unclear and incomplete; 'it is a poor example' is vague but kept as is for correction.

× A stocking whenever I get to stop in a queue.

✓ I get stressed whenever I have to stop in a queue.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'A stocking' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× 2 with someone for a long time and staying in a queue for a long time makes me impatient and I pale at distracted an anxious and I I feel exhausted during that time.

✓ Waiting with someone for a long time and staying in a queue for a long time makes me impatient, and I feel distracted, anxious, and exhausted during that time.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and words like 'pale at' which are incorrect. '2' should be 'Waiting'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I feel stressful and a exhausted whenever I have to do some folks for a long time.

✓ I feel stressed and exhausted whenever I have to do some tasks for a long time.

'Stressful' is an adjective describing a situation, but the speaker feels 'stressed'. 'A exhausted' is incorrect; 'exhausted' does not need an article. 'Folks' is incorrect here; likely meant 'tasks' or 'work'.

× For example, if I am traveling for supervise supervision oversight in the construction area.

✓ For example, if I am traveling to supervise supervision oversight in the construction area.

The phrase 'traveling for supervise' is incorrect; it should be 'traveling to supervise'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for verb form and preposition.

× Poorer long day I peel existed it it evening.

✓ After a long day, I feel exhausted in the evening.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'Poorer', 'peel existed'. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes definitely. I am working in a construction business where I have to go, I have to travel for super supervise the site construction site in different places and it needed bloss of hard work.

✓ Yes, definitely. I am working in the construction business where I have to travel to supervise construction sites in different places, and it needs lots of hard work.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and prepositions: 'super supervise' should be 'to supervise'; 'site construction site' is redundant; 'needed bloss' is incorrect, corrected to 'needs lots'.

× I am passing.

✓ I am patient.

The word 'passing' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'patient' to describe the speaker's quality.

× Yes, yes, definitely. During my side I'm more impatient and then now is the in that time I don't have to do the work for myself.

✓ Yes, yes, definitely. During my childhood, I was more impatient, and at that time I didn't have to do the work myself.

'During my side' is incorrect; it should be 'during my childhood'. 'Then now is the in that time' is unclear and corrected to 'at that time'. 'Don't have to do the work for myself' corrected to 'didn't have to do the work myself' for tense and pronoun use.

× There is someone who always helps me to be a good person.

✓ There was someone who always helped me to be a good person.

The tense is inconsistent with previous sentence; past tense 'was' and 'helped' is appropriate here.

× Now I have to do myself, so I have to be passing him.

✓ Now I have to do it myself, so I have to be patient.

'Do myself' is incorrect; it should be 'do it myself'. 'Passing him' is incorrect; the correct word is 'patient'.