耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并明确表达耐心的具体表现。

範例: Yes, I am a patient person. For example, my teachers and classmates often praise me for staying calm and understanding when problems arise.

建議: 表达不流畅且语法错误较多，建议使用简单句子清楚说明使你不耐烦的具体情况。

範例: I feel impatient when people do not understand what I mean during conversations. It makes me frustrated because communication is unclear.

建議: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，建议简洁表达感受并说明原因。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel a bit frustrated at first. However, once I get used to it, I can manage my emotions better.

建議: 表达不够连贯且有语法错误，建议使用连贯句子说明工作中耐心的重要性。

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. It takes time and effort to memorize many things, and without patience, I cannot achieve good results.

建議: 回答不清晰且语法错误多，建议简洁表达现在比小时候更有耐心并说明原因。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to be anxious to get what I wanted, but now I understand that some things take time.

× For instance, my teachers and my classmates always said to me that so I always have their patience when getting on with disorders.

✓ For instance, my teachers and my classmates always say to me that I always have their patience when getting on with disorders.

这里的动词时态和主语不匹配，teachers和classmates是复数，动词应使用复数形式'say'，而不是过去式'said'。另外，句子结构不清晰，建议调整。

× I always have their patience when getting on with disorders.

✓ I always have their patience when getting along with others.

短语'getting on with disorders'不合适，正确表达应为'getting along with others'，表示与他人相处。

× There are a lot of things that makes me feel impatient.

✓ There are a lot of things that make me feel impatient.

主语'things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'make'，而不是单数形式'makes'。

× when I was talking about this thing in the others cannot correctly understand my meetings and at that time I will feel impatient.

✓ when I was talking about this thing and others cannot correctly understand my meanings, at that time I feel impatient.

'in the others'用法错误，应为'and others'；'meetings'应为'meanings'，表示意思；时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时或过去时。

× Well, I think. When I have to do something for loans high it makes me. Feel a little bit difficult and frustrated when I began to do that when I begin to do these things but if we just get into the routine of this since I will just to keep all my emotions that we.

✓ Well, I think when I have to do something for a long time, it makes me feel a little bit frustrated at the beginning. But if I just get into the routine, I can control my emotions.

原句结构混乱，语义不清，需重组句子，使表达清晰连贯。

× My job just needs me to be patient things.

✓ My job just needs me to be patient with things.

缺少介词'with'，使句子完整且符合习惯表达。

× without the patients I cannot get a good outcome on my work.

✓ Without patience, I cannot get a good outcome in my work.

'patients'是病人，错误使用，应为'patience'（耐心）；介词'on'应改为'in'。

× Yes, I am more patients now than.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now than before.

'patients'是复数名词，错误使用，应为形容词'patient'。

× When I work when I was a child since when I was a child.

✓ When I was a child,

句子重复且结构混乱，应简化为正确表达。

× I was anxious to get things that I wanted, but when I grew older, I think. Something needs to change, some tide together.

✓ I was anxious to get the things I wanted, but when I grew older, I thought something needed to change and to settle down.

句子中'but when I grew older, I think.'时态不一致，应为过去时；'some tide together'表达错误，应为'settle down'或类似表达。