耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I stay calm in difficult situations. For example, when faced with challenges, I take time to understand the problem deeply before reacting, which helps me handle things effectively.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about situations that make you impatient and avoid repetition.

範例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for someone who arrives late or when standing in long queues. These situations make me restless because I value punctuality and dislike wasting time.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Focus on giving a clear and direct response, then support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition and incomplete sentences.

範例: When I have to work for a long time, I stay focused and try to understand the task thoroughly. For instance, I research related information to improve my performance and ensure I give my best effort.

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question. Try to respond clearly and relate your current situation to the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid irrelevant information.

範例: Currently, I am a student, so I do not have a job that requires patience. However, I understand that in the future, any stable job I choose will likely need me to be patient and persistent.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear comparison between your past and present patience levels, using linking words to explain reasons. Keep your sentences complete and coherent.

範例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to think deeply about situations before reacting. As a child, I was more impulsive and wanted immediate results, but now I understand the value of patience.

× I always try to being calm and deep research about this situation, how it's work or patience is necessary for everybody.

✓ I always try to be calm and do deep research about this situation, how it works, or why patience is necessary for everybody.

The verb 'try' should be followed by the base form 'to be' instead of 'to being'. Also, 'deep research' requires the verb 'do' to indicate the action. 'How it's work' is incorrect; it should be 'how it works' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× how it's work or patience is necessary for everybody.

✓ how it works or why patience is necessary for everybody.

The verb 'work' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'works'. Also, adding 'why' clarifies the meaning.

× Whenever I wait for something or someone who are expected late from its actual time, it is very impatient for me or rather than in the situation when we are in standing the long queues, it is also failed, failed, failed me, impatient.

✓ Whenever I wait for something or someone who is expected to be late from the actual time, I feel very impatient. Also, when we stand in long queues, it makes me feel impatient.

The pronoun 'who' refers to 'someone' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'Its actual time' is incorrect; 'the actual time' is appropriate. 'It is very impatient for me' is incorrect; feelings are expressed as 'I feel impatient'. The phrase 'failed me' is incorrect in this context; 'makes me feel impatient' is correct. 'In standing the long queues' should be 'stand in long queues'.

× in the situation when we are in standing the long queues

✓ in the situation when we are standing in long queues

The correct preposition is 'in' before 'long queues', and 'standing' should not be preceded by 'in'.

× it is also failed, failed, failed me, impatient.

✓ it also makes me feel impatient.

The phrase 'failed me' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'makes me feel impatient' to describe the feeling caused by the situation.

× Whenever I work for for a long time, I always concentrate on it and research how to deeply work work and collect more information about the work and do my 100% in the work and I do in the. Consist table form.

✓ Whenever I work for a long time, I always concentrate on it, research how to work deeply, collect more information about the work, and give my 100%.

The sentence has repetition ('for for', 'work work') and incomplete phrases ('I do in the. Consist table form'). The corrected sentence removes repetition, clarifies the meaning, and completes the thought.

× To be honestly, I'm studying right now so I'm nothing to do for work.

✓ To be honest, I'm studying right now, so I have nothing to do for work.

The phrase 'To be honestly' should be 'To be honest'. 'I'm nothing to do for work' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have nothing to do for work'.

× All my expenses were sponsored by my parents and I appreciate them.

✓ All my expenses are sponsored by my parents, and I appreciate them.

Since the student is currently studying, the present tense 'are sponsored' is more appropriate than past tense 'were sponsored'.

× In the future I will try to plan. I will plan for a sector which is also a stable job.

✓ In the future, I will try to plan. I will choose a sector that offers a stable job.

The phrase 'plan for a sector which is also a stable job' is awkward. 'Choose a sector that offers a stable job' is clearer and more natural.

× To be honestly, in my childhood there was a lack of patience because right now I am always studied deeply about the situations and how situations work and always are patients come from the thoughts and in the deep thinking but in the.

✓ To be honest, in my childhood, I lacked patience because right now I always study situations deeply and understand how they work. Patience comes from thoughts and deep thinking, but in the past...

'To be honestly' should be 'To be honest'. 'I am always studied' is incorrect; it should be 'I always study'. 'Always are patients come' is incorrect; it should be 'patience comes'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.