零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e sentence structure ar grammar bhalo kore use korun. Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek somoy redundant. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jate answer ta natural lage. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta logical hoy.

範例: I usually eat snacks in the evening because I am free at that time. So, I like to sit in my dining area and enjoy my snacks comfortably.

建議: Apnar answer e filler words (uh, umm) komate hobe. Apni clear ar direct sentence use korun. Apnar opinion ta bhalo, kintu apni specific karon dite paren keno snacks important. Linking words use korun jemon 'because' ar 'if' properly.

範例: From my perspective, snacks are important because if we skip them sometimes, we may feel weak and lose energy.

建議: Apni past tense bhalo kore use korun. Apnar answer incomplete mone hocche, tai apni specific examples dite paren. Sentence gulo ke simple ar clear rakhun. Linking words use korun jate answer ta fluent hoy.

範例: When I was young, I was very fond of eating snacks. For example, I liked different types of desserts such as cakes and cookies.

建議: Apni sentence structure ar grammar improve korun. Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache, tai apni clear ar specific examples den. Linking words use korun jemon 'such as' ar 'sometimes' properly. Apni sentence gulo ke complete korun.

範例: I don't have a specific favorite snack. I enjoy different types of snacks such as chow mein and pasta. On the other hand, I also like desserts and sometimes I prefer to drink milkshakes.

× Well, I prefer to take snacks in evening time because of in that time I stay always free.

✓ Well, I prefer to take snacks in the evening because at that time I am always free.

The phrase 'in evening time' is incorrect; it should be 'in the evening' with the definite article 'the'. Also, 'because of in that time' is incorrect; it should be 'because at that time'. Prepositions must be used correctly to indicate time and cause.

× So I have to sit in my dining place then I prefers to take my snacks.

✓ So I have to sit in my dining place then I prefer to take my snacks.

The verb 'prefers' does not agree with the subject 'I'. For the first person singular, the base form 'prefer' should be used without 's'.

× For my own perspective, I would like to say, uh, snacks, uh, are very, uh, crucial things in our life because of we, if we, umm, uh, if we miss, uh, snacks, uh, sometimes then, uh, we feel weak.

✓ From my own perspective, I would like to say that snacks are very crucial in our life because if we sometimes miss snacks, we feel weak.

The phrase 'because of we' is incorrect; 'because' should be followed by a clause, not a pronoun alone. Also, the sentence is wordy and unclear; restructuring improves clarity and grammar.

× If I talk about when I was young in that time I am really fond of eating snacks.

✓ If I talk about when I was young, at that time I was really fond of eating snacks.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the time referred to is past, 'am' should be changed to 'was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× If I talk about the specifics next, then I am really fond of to taking different types of dessert such as.

✓ If I talk about the specifics next, then I am really fond of taking different types of desserts such as.

The phrase 'fond of to taking' is incorrect; 'fond of' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'dessert' should be plural 'desserts' when referring to different types.

× Well, I don't like to take specific snacks.

✓ Well, I don't like to eat specific snacks.

The verb 'take' is not commonly used with 'snacks' in this context; 'eat' is the correct verb to describe consuming food.

× I really fond of to take different types of snacks such as chow Mein, pasta on the other hand, I prefer to take dessert.

✓ I am really fond of taking different types of snacks such as chow mein and pasta; on the other hand, I prefer to eat dessert.

The phrase 'I really fond of to take' is incorrect; it should be 'I am really fond of taking'. Also, 'take dessert' should be 'eat dessert'. Additionally, 'chow Mein' should be 'chow mein' (lowercase 'm').

× Sometimes I prefer to drink a lot of milkshake and on that.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to drink a lot of milkshake and so on.

The phrase 'and on that' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'and so on' to indicate continuation or additional items.