零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I usually eat snacks after school because I feel very hungry then, and eating helps improve my mood and reduce stress.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有重复词汇。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，避免重复，并解释原因。

範例: I don't think eating snacks is healthy, but I still enjoy them because they help me feel better and reduce stress.

建議: 回答较好，但时态使用不准确，应使用过去时。建议注意时态一致，并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks after school when I was young because they improved my mood and helped reduce my anxiety.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的单数和复数形式，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I like to eat candy and chocolate because they improve my mood and give me energy.

× I usually eat snack umm after school because it is a time I was uh, I am so hungry so I need to eat snacks to improve my mood and and reduce my stress.

✓ I usually eat snacks umm after school because it is a time I was uh, I am so hungry so I need to eat snacks to improve my mood and reduce my stress.

“snack”应使用复数形式“snacks”，因为这里指的是一般吃零食的习惯，表示不止一个零食。

× I usually eat snack umm after school because it is a time I was uh, I am so hungry so I need to eat snacks to improve my mood and and reduce my stress.

✓ I usually eat snacks umm after school because it is a time when I am so hungry so I need to eat snacks to improve my mood and reduce my stress.

“it is a time I was uh”中“was”时态不对，应使用现在时“am”，因为描述的是现在的习惯和状态。

× Absolutely not, but I I still want to eat because it is an important, important thing to me to improve my mood and and reduce my stress. It is every place by any other things.

✓ Absolutely not, but I still want to eat because it is an important thing to me to improve my mood and reduce my stress. It is better than any other things.

“every place by any other things”表达不正确，应改为“better than any other things”表示比较。

× Yes, I always eat snacks after school because it can improve my mood and make me feel better and it is also a great way to reduce my anxiety so I'm really thankful for the snack.

✓ Yes, I always ate snacks after school because it could improve my mood and make me feel better and it was also a great way to reduce my anxiety so I'm really thankful for the snack.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时态，如“ate”、“could”、“was”。

× For me, I always eat candy and chocolate because it is kind of snack that can improve my mood and and give me many energy.

✓ For me, I always eat candy and chocolate because they are kinds of snacks that can improve my mood and give me a lot of energy.

“it is kind of snack”中“snack”应为复数“snacks”，且“it”应改为“they”指代复数，另外“many energy”应改为“a lot of energy”，因为energy是不可数名词。