零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to be more precise and natural in your answer. Avoid confusion like mentioning '4:00 or 5:00 AM' when you mean afternoon. Also, complete your sentences clearly and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon, around 4 or 5 PM, when I start feeling hungry between lunch and dinner. For example, sometimes my friends and I have snacks while watching TV together.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a clear opinion, then explain with examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

範例: I think eating snacks is generally unhealthy; however, some snacks can be healthy if they are made from natural and organic ingredients. For instance, fruit salads with plums are a good choice.

建議: Be careful with tense consistency and clarity. Use past tense when talking about the past. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: Yes, when I was young, I usually ate snacks around 3 or 4 PM in the afternoon, typically after lunch.

建議: Try to give a clear and direct answer. Avoid confusing phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

範例: I don't have a specific favorite snack because I enjoy many kinds. For example, I like chocolates and dips, but I also try other snacks depending on my mood.

× sometimes me and my friends are watching some

✓ sometimes my friends and I are watching some

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the sentence. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, it is polite and grammatically correct to mention oneself last in a list of subjects.

× I usually eat snacks in late afternoon around 4:00 or 5:00 AM

✓ I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon around 4:00 or 5:00 PM

The phrase 'in late afternoon' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the time of day. Also, '4:00 or 5:00 AM' is inconsistent with 'late afternoon'; it should be 'PM' to match the time of day.

× It's not healthy eating snacks but I but I think there are some healthy snacks like made from natural and organic items like fruit salad like plums.

✓ It's not healthy to eat snacks, but I think there are some healthy snacks made from natural and organic items, like fruit salad or plums.

The sentence has repetition ('but I but I') and awkward phrasing. 'Eating snacks' should be 'to eat snacks' after 'It's not healthy'. Also, 'like made from' is incorrect; it should be 'made from'. The list of examples should be connected properly with 'or'.

× Yes, as a habit I usually eat snacks at 3:00 or 4:00 PM during evenings and afternoons and also I prefer to eat at after my lunch.

✓ Yes, as a habit I usually ate snacks at 3:00 or 4:00 PM during evenings and afternoons, and also I preferred to eat after my lunch.

The question is about past habits ('Did you often eat snacks when you were young?'), so the verbs should be in the past tense: 'ate' and 'preferred'. Also, 'at after my lunch' is incorrect; it should be 'after my lunch' without 'at'.

× Usually I didn't have a certain choice for it it because I eat any kind of snacks in as much as I like chocolates or dippy dips or not.

✓ Usually I didn't have a certain choice because I ate any kind of snacks as long as I liked chocolates or dips or not.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since it refers to past habits, 'eat' should be 'ate' and 'like' should be 'liked'. Also, 'in as much as' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'as long as'. 'Dippy dips' is informal and unclear; 'dips' is more appropriate.