零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达如“relax myself”不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: I usually eat snacks while watching TV shows or movies because it helps me relax. Moreover, when I feel upset, having a snack can cheer me up.

建議: 回答直接，但语法和表达有小错误，如“many fat and sugar”应为“a lot of fat and sugar”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: No, I don't think snacks are healthy because they contain a lot of fat and sugar. However, I find them so delicious that I can't resist eating them.

建議: 时态使用不准确，“always save”应为“always saved”。表达略显简单，建议丰富细节并使用连接词。

範例: Yes, when I was young, I always saved money to buy snacks. It was one of the happiest things I did during my childhood because I enjoyed choosing my favorite treats.

建議: 语法错误，如“it always make”应为“it always makes”。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词来增强表达。

範例: I prefer sweet snacks like cake because they always make me feel satisfied and happy, especially after a long day.

× I usually eat snacks when I am watching TV shows or movies.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I watch TV shows or movies.

这里的时间状语从句表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是进行时。

× Also when I feel upset, I would eat snacks to make me happier.

✓ Also when I feel upset, I eat snacks to make me happier.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，不能用would表示过去或假设，应该用一般现在时。

× No, I don't think snacks are healthy because they contain many fat and sugar.

✓ No, I don't think snacks are healthy because they contain much fat and sugar.

fat和sugar是不可数名词，前面应该用much而不是many。

× Yes, when I was young, I always save money to buy snacks.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I always saved money to buy snacks.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应该用过去时saved，而不是现在时save。

× I prefer some sweet snacks like cake because it always make me feel satisfied and happy.

✓ I prefer some sweet snacks like cake because it always makes me feel satisfied and happy.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词make应加-s变为makes，保持主谓一致。