零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，使表达更清晰流畅。

範例: I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed or bored at home. For example, I like to eat fruits and crunchy potato chips while watching TV, which helps me feel relaxed.

建議: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但部分表达如“which is healthy”应改为“which are healthy”，注意主谓一致。建议加强语法准确性。

範例: I think eating some snacks is fine, especially fruits, which are healthy and good for the body. However, eating too many sweet snacks can damage teeth and cause weight gain, so I try to avoid them.

建議: 回答内容完整且有逻辑，但口语填充词“Umm”影响流畅度，建议减少使用，同时可用连接词增强连贯性。

範例: Not really. When I was younger, my mom controlled how many snacks I ate because she was worried I wouldn't eat my main meals properly. Therefore, I only ate snacks in moderation.

建議: 回答中出现拼写错误“Wingate”应为“weight”，且句子结构稍显重复。建议注意拼写准确，简化句子并避免重复表达。

範例: I like eating fruits and crunchy potato chips. Recently, I limit sweet snacks because I am worried about weight gain. Therefore, I prefer healthy and tasty fruits like cherries.

× I think eating some snacks is fine, especially some fruits which is healthy and will not do harm to our body.

✓ I think eating some snacks is fine, especially some fruits which are healthy and will not do harm to our body.

这里的主语是复数形式的“fruits”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。主谓一致错误。

× So I prefer to eat some fruits and cherries which are not only tasty but also healthy.

✓ So I prefer to eat some fruits and cherries, which are not only tasty but also healthy.

在“cherries”和“which”之间应加逗号，表示非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个短语。缺少逗号会影响句意的准确表达。