零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct verb forms and make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Usually, I eat snacks while watching videos or television because it makes the experience more enjoyable and interesting.

建議: Improve your grammar by using correct plural forms and articles. Use linking words to connect contrasting ideas clearly. Be more specific and avoid repetition.

範例: Some snacks, such as fruits and nuts, are healthy; however, others like chips and sweets are unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat. Nevertheless, snacks can be useful to prevent hunger between meals.

建議: Focus on answering the question directly with clear and relevant information. Avoid confusing or unrelated statements. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because they were popular and commonly eaten by many people in my family.

建議: Use correct plural forms and improve sentence structure. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

範例: I like all types of snacks, especially watermelon in summer because it contains a lot of water and is very refreshing. I also enjoy eating chips occasionally.

× Usually I eat snacks when I watching videos or when I watch television, so it's make me and it makes for what I see.

✓ Usually I eat snacks when I am watching videos or when I watch television, so it makes me and it makes for what I see.

The verb 'watching' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'it's make me' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes me' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Usually I eat snacks when I watching videos or when I watch television, so it's make me and it makes for what I see.

✓ Usually I eat snacks when I am watching videos or when I watch television, so it makes me and it makes for what I see.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× Some snack are healthy like food like fruit and nut, but many others such as chips sweet or unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

✓ Some snacks are healthy foods like fruit and nuts, but many others such as chips and sweets are unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'food like fruit and nut' should be 'foods like fruit and nuts' to be grammatically correct and consistent in number.

× Some snack are healthy like food like fruit and nut, but many others such as chips sweet or unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

✓ Some snacks are healthy foods like fruit and nuts, but many others such as chips and sweets are unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

The phrase 'chips sweet or unhealthy' is incorrect; it should be 'chips and sweets are unhealthy' to properly connect the items and verb.

× Some snack are healthy like food like fruit and nut, but many others such as chips sweet or unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

✓ Some snacks are healthy foods like fruit and nuts, but many others such as chips and sweets are unhealthy because they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

The verb 'are' is correct for plural subjects, but 'chips sweet or unhealthy' lacks a verb; adding 'are' after 'sweets' is necessary for subject-verb agreement.

× I think a snack can be useful to stop your stomach from feeling hungry between meals.

✓ I think a snack can be useful to stop your stomach from feeling hungry between meals.

This sentence is correct in modal verb usage; no correction needed.

× Absolutely, I hate snakes when I was young because it's like it's popular and old people eat snacks.

✓ Absolutely, I hated snacks when I was young because it was popular and old people ate snacks.

The verb 'hate' should be in past tense 'hated' to match the past time frame 'when I was young'. Also, 'it's like it's popular' should be 'it was popular' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Eat' should be 'ate' for past tense.

× Absolutely, I hate snakes when I was young because it's like it's popular and old people eat snacks.

✓ Absolutely, I hated snacks when I was young because it was popular and old people ate snacks.

The word 'snakes' is incorrect; it should be 'snacks' to refer to food items. Also, 'snacks' is plural and should be consistent throughout.

× All all house should be should be their snacks.

✓ Every house should have their own snacks.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. Correct sentence structure requires a subject, verb, and object in proper order. 'All all house should be should be their snacks' is incorrect and confusing.

× All type of snack actually, and I love food.

✓ All types of snacks actually, and I love food.

'Type' should be plural 'types' to match 'all', and 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to be grammatically correct.

× All type of snack actually, and I love food.

✓ All types of snacks actually, and I love food.

The conjunction 'and' is used correctly here; no correction needed.

× I love especially watermelon because it's in summer, it's contain a lot of water and it's fresh.

✓ I especially love watermelon because it's summer, it contains a lot of water and it's fresh.

The verb 'contain' should be 'contains' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'it's in summer' is better expressed as 'it's summer'.

× I love especially watermelon because it's in summer, it's contain a lot of water and it's fresh.

✓ I especially love watermelon because it's summer, it contains a lot of water and it's fresh.

The preposition 'in' before 'summer' is unnecessary; 'it's summer' is the correct expression.

× Also, I like chips sometimes.

✓ Also, I like chips sometimes.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.