零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually eat snacks after finishing my homework. I enjoy playing tennis during my free time, and sometimes I share snacks with my friends after playing.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai nghĩa. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ lý do tại sao bạn nghĩ ăn vặt không tốt cho sức khỏe.

範例: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy. Many snacks are like fast food and contain a lot of sugar and fat, which can cause health problems such as obesity.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng.

範例: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young. I preferred eating porridge and meat because they helped me grow. I avoided snacks because they contain a lot of sugar and can make people gain weight.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh nói mâu thuẫn trong câu trả lời và giải thích rõ ràng về sở thích cũng như tác hại của món ăn vặt bạn thích.

範例: I like to eat French fries with tomato sauce because they taste delicious. However, I know they are not very healthy because they can cause weight gain and other health problems.

× I usually snack when I finish at my homework and it's not in the free time I like.

✓ I usually snack when I finish my homework and it's not during the free time I like.

The phrase 'finish at my homework' is incorrect; the preposition 'at' should be omitted. Also, 'in the free time' should be 'during the free time' to correctly express the time period.

× I like tennis because it's make me a good hair for to continue to study homework and I can eat it with my friends and share it with other people.

✓ I like tennis because it makes me feel good to continue studying homework, and I can eat it with my friends and share it with other people.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'a good hair' is incorrect; it should be 'feel good'. The phrase 'for to continue to study homework' is awkward and should be 'to continue studying homework'.

× I think snake is one of the most, uh, umm, the fast foods in, in the, in the Arkansas around the world.

✓ I think snacks are one of the most common fast foods in Arkansas and around the world.

The word 'snake' is a misspelling of 'snack' and should be plural 'snacks' to match 'one of the most'. Also, 'the fast foods' should be 'common fast foods' for clarity.

× It's making a harmful for my health like fresh and obesity.

✓ It's harmful to my health and can cause issues like fatigue and obesity.

The phrase 'making a harmful' is incorrect; 'harmful' is an adjective and should not be used with 'making'. 'Fresh' is likely a misused word here; 'fatigue' fits better in context.

× No, I don't usually snack when I'm young because when I'm young I like it still porridge and I like eating meat to make me grow up and I don't eat snack when I young because it's a lot of sugars and have have many have many sugar it made me fats so I don't like eating snacks when I were.

✓ No, I didn't usually snack when I was young because I liked to eat porridge and meat to help me grow. I didn't eat snacks when I was young because they have a lot of sugar and made me fat, so I didn't like eating snacks then.

The tense should be past ('didn't', 'was', 'liked') to match the time frame 'when I was young'. Also, 'have have many have many sugar' is incorrect and should be 'have a lot of sugar'. 'Made me fats' should be 'made me fat'.

× Yes, snack, I like to eat your French fry with tomato sauce because it's had the good delicious for my health, but I think it is very harmful for my health.

✓ Yes, I like to eat French fries with tomato sauce because they taste good, but I think they are very harmful to my health.

'Your French fry' is incorrect; it should be 'French fries'. 'It's had the good delicious' is incorrect; it should be 'they taste good'. Pronouns should agree in number and clarity.

× It makes me fast and obesity for my health.

✓ It causes me to gain weight and obesity, which is bad for my health.

'Makes me fast' is incorrect; likely intended 'fat'. The sentence should express that eating snacks causes weight gain and obesity.