零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免使用代词“it”而不明确指代，且句子结构可以更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel hungry because they help me regain my energy.

建議: 回答中应直接表达个人观点，避免使用泛泛的“you”，并且句子结构可以更自然。可以用连接词丰富内容。

範例: I think eating snacks in moderation is fine, but eating too many can harm your health and lead to obesity.

建議: 时态使用不准确，应使用过去时描述过去的习惯。避免重复表达，句子可以更简洁自然。

範例: No, I rarely ate snacks when I was young because I was concerned about gaining weight and preferred to stay healthy.

建議: 回答较好，但可以使用更多丰富的词汇描述口感和味道，使表达更生动。

範例: I enjoy eating potato chips because they are crispy and flavorful. My favorite is the cucumber-flavored ones, which taste very refreshing.

× I usually eat it when I'm hungry in the afternoon because it can replenish my physical strength.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm hungry in the afternoon because they can replenish my physical strength.

这里的代词“it”指代不明确，应该用复数形式“snacks”对应复数代词“they”，保持代词和先行词的一致性。

× You can eat less snacks, but eating too much will affect your health and easily cause obesity.

✓ You can eat fewer snacks, but eating too many will affect your health and easily cause obesity.

“snacks”是可数名词，修饰可数名词应使用“fewer”而非“less”；“too much”用于不可数名词，修饰可数名词应使用“too many”。

× No, I eat it occasionally because eating snacks often makes me fat.

✓ No, I eat them occasionally because eating snacks often makes me fat.

“snacks”是复数名词，代词应使用复数形式“them”而非单数“it”。

× No, I eat it occasionally because eating snacks often makes me fat.

✓ No, I ate them occasionally because eating snacks often made me fat.

问题中询问过去的习惯，回答应使用过去时态，动词“eat”应改为“ate”，“makes”应改为“made”。

× I also advocate that everyone should eat less snacks.

✓ I also advocate that everyone should eat fewer snacks.

“snacks”是可数名词，修饰可数名词应使用“fewer”而非“less”。