零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and natural by directly answering the question and avoiding redundancy. Also, use correct prepositions and verb forms. For example, instead of 'eat them on home and watch you do in my iPad,' say 'eat them at home while watching videos on my iPad.'

範例: I usually eat snacks after school. I like to buy one or two of my favorite snacks and eat them at home while watching videos on my iPad.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use more natural expressions and correct grammar, such as 'Of course not' instead of 'Of course, no.' Also, use plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Of course not. My mother always warns me about the harmful effects of snacks because they contain many chemical substances. However, I sometimes eat snacks as my afternoon meal when I feel hungry.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific.

範例: Yes, of course. Although snacks can have negative effects on health, I found them delicious and convenient to eat. After school, snacks provided me with enough energy before my next class.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and confusing phrases. Make sure to directly answer the question with clear and relevant information. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unrelated or incorrect words like 'sweep of teeth' or 'in my ears.'

範例: I like to eat sweet snacks such as cakes and cookies. They have a pleasant smell and taste. These snacks are very popular in my neighborhood, so I can easily buy them at small shops nearby.

× I eat them on home and watch you do in my iPad.

✓ I eat them at home and watch videos on my iPad.

The phrase 'on home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at home'. Also, 'watch you do' is unclear and likely a misstatement; 'watch videos' fits the context better.

× It contains a lot of chemical substance.

✓ It contains a lot of chemical substances.

The noun 'substance' should be plural 'substances' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'chemical substances' is the correct plural form.

× although it have a bad effect on the health, I still think snack is very delicious and convenient to uh, eat.

✓ although it has a bad effect on health, I still think snacks are very delicious and convenient to eat.

The subject 'it' should be followed by 'has' (third person singular). 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match the context. 'On the health' should be 'on health' without 'the'.

× Uh after school is provide me the enough energy before I study the next class.

✓ Uh, after school provides me with enough energy before I study the next class.

The verb 'is provide' is incorrect; it should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'after school'. Also, 'the enough energy' should be 'enough energy' without 'the'. 'Provides me with' is the correct phrase.

× But I love to eat the tea next week.

✓ But I love to drink tea.

'Eat the tea next week' is incorrect; tea is a drink and cannot be eaten. Also, 'next week' is irrelevant here and causes confusion.

× I love the smell and the sweep of teeth.

✓ I love the smell and the sweetness of the tea.

'Sweep of teeth' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'sweetness' to describe taste.

× Beside this neck is so very popular in my neighbors.

✓ Besides, this snack is very popular among my neighbors.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'Neck' is a typo for 'snack'. 'Popular in my neighbors' should be 'popular among my neighbors'.

× Therefore I can buy it any small shops in my ears.

✓ Therefore, I can buy it at any small shop near my house.

'Any small shops' needs 'at' as preposition. 'In my ears' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; 'near my house' or 'in my area' is appropriate.